Reviewer: redfoot Signed
Date: July 18 2022
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Another absolutely excellent chapter, thank you!
Leah has been my favourite (alongside Zoey) since the start so really pleased to have such a long chapter with her as the focal point. Love when Anna slips into Poppy mode, including the subtle nuances of things like capitalising 'Her' (religious...)
Tragic story with Toe Jam. I would kinda like to have a 'flashback' to that moment somewhere down the line. I love the idea of the friends dynamic - one suddenly becoming the all powerful force in the other's life, and I just know you would write that brilliantly.
Like other commenters, would like Anna to imprint (still harbouring a dream of it being to Zoey) rather than escape this nightmare.
Author's Response: Thanks redfoot,
Good catch with the capitalized pronoun thing, that was exactly what I was going for.
Hmm I did consider adding that ToeJam's origin scene. The story is already so long, so there were some things that I had to cut out. Also, writing minors in a fetish setting--even if it's obviously not sexualized-- is a tricky line to walk for me (it's why I cut out Annabelle's cousin plotline from the progressing story). But maybe I'll include a scene as one of the side stories I'll publish after the main story is finished (I mean if there's interest for it). Also, I love the power shift of a friends to shrinkee plot too, so you're not alone.
Hahaha it's crazy how you and so many people are pro-imprinted Annabelle.
Thanks for commenting redfoot! If you have any other side story suggestions, just let me know!