Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: October 28 2022
Title: Chapter 1: The Limousine Ride
Absolutely loved the first two chapters. So far this has a lot of the things I like in size fiction. Interesting world building, focus on gore and cruelty, a semi well meaning character being "corrupted". I love the pacing too, drawing out the reveal of exactly what's going on is the right call imho.
As far as the class or caste element goes, that's very intriguing too.
I always feel like there's an undercurrent of eroticizing systemic inequalities in size fiction anyway, just look at all the celebrity giantess content. you've got the guts to make it overt, and the result is heady decadent feel that i think puts some of the taboo back into erotic size fiction.
Anyway, I hope you have a good experience with this story, because I'd love to read more from you in the future if it works out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I really like playing with those taboo topics, and I feel like mixed-size societies rarely examine the kinds of institutionalized power that might spring up from such a marginalized group. There's something about fetishizing systemic injustice that is cathartic for the problems we have in real life. Size dynamics are fun because someone tiny could never face someone big. But we already experience a sort of social tinyness that can feel like a greater divide than a micro trapped in greedy jaws.
Thanks again, and stay tuned for the next chapter. I expect to have it finished later today.