Reviewer: Northgate Signed
Date: September 02 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story
Just wanted to jump in and add my contuned support for the author. Simply put great story. Please continue. I love it.
Now I also want to comment on the specifics of the story at this point although now that I read previous comments I see I'm not the only one on many of these points. I guess great minds think alike or maybe it's small minds!
It kills me that Tom can't learn a lesson from his time with Janine. He meets Karolina and instead of playing the pity card, he tells her he watched her naked and that she looks like a Godess. What is he thinking?!?
I see this going three ways, all which are good. 1. Fun and games with Karolina - maybe gentle or maybe mother like daughter. Maybe she'll design a necklace that will actually work. 2. She reunites Tom back with his sister but then we will have the curious Sam who we all know can't wait to get her hands on little Tom. 3. Karolina gives Tom back to Janine. This one gets my vote! After all Karolina is the overindulgent mom who got a mainstream rock band to play at her daughter's birthday party. She isn't going to deny Janine her favorite little plaything. All three choices are good and I can't wait to see where this goes next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your continued support. Tom is still young and blinded by his libido which means pussy. You make some astute observations and your ideas all have potential but let's us not discount another possibility - the existence of Marta the housekeeper she may yet play a more significant role...maybe :)