It was a good story. Nice and violent with a nice twist at the end. The scenes with the tiny people did seem rushed though. Kinda glossed over. Still good though.

Wow this story is good! I'm upset with myself that I didn't find it earlier. I'm enjoying this story on two levels. One, the obvious gts-fantasy portion is hot. Two, the commentary between the rich and poor is spot on. I hate celebrity news/gossip and how some people practically worship celebrities and defend their actions. The world you created in your story is a direct parallel to our famed obsessed culture . Will we be seeing more celebrities? Are giantess size related to their egotism? Can't wait to read more!

What a great quickie! This story is like my ultimate fantasy. I loved every word of it!

Great job on this chapter. The imagery was pretty damn powerful. I thought I actually smelled the chick’s feet while reading the descriptions. Hope to see more!

Really hot story. I'm especially loving this new friendship between Linsey and Susan. Keep up the great work!

Hope to see more!

   After reading chapter one through nine, I was a bit hesitant to read chapter ten, I must admit. I mean, nothing could top what I read between chapter one and nine. Those chapters were too good. Boy was I wrong – and I’ve never been happier to be wrong. Chapter 10 was amazing.

   You have a way of creating vivid scenes and powerful imagery without an insane amount of details and words. It’s such a difficult thing to master. (You know the old saying “less goes a long way”, or something like that). Seared into my mind is that image of Melanie’s first victim in the pool. The way she swallowed that little guy and kept swimming while his body went tumbling down her esophagus and into her stomach as she moved to the next victim. I’m still dazed just thinking about that.

   I also love the beginning stages of David interacting with Melanie’s future victims, such as the moments he was in the dollhouse. Personally, I would like to see more of David coming out of his shell and maybe even taunting the victims. That’s just me though.

   I could keep going on, but I fear I might just start babbling. I can’t get over how good this story is. I’m kicking myself for not finding it earlier, but it’s been such a great pleasure reading huge chunks in a row. See? I’m babbling now. Great story. Hope to see more from ya!

So, here’s the thing…if Sarah is out of the picture, it’s just David and Melanie having episodic adventures. Which is cool! But I would love to see Sarah sticking around as it could draw up some conflict between Melanie and David.

As of right now, David hasn’t been objecting to anything Melanie does (shit, I wouldn’t). David’s enthusiasm and constant encouragement were the reason why Melanie started eating people. What happens when that encouragement dries up by David telling her not to eat someone? It could go different ways: Melanie could be cool with it…or not. Melanie could grow jealous of David’s newfound relationship with Sarah – even if she’s not a love interest and just someone David pities. Or, as you alluded to in this chapter, David could – without telling Melanie – make sure that Sarah *wins* Melanie’s competition and let her live.

Hmmm…many ways to go about this…In the end, I hope you keep Sarah around. That, and have lots of vore in the next chapter :) If you want to shoot ideas to me, you can always email me. You should still have my address ;)

This. Is. Awesome. I love me a good cruel, uncaring, unjust, sadistic, torturing, evil, violent giantess. I’m not into the toilet stuff, but that scene where redhead made the smaller brunette drink her piss, I was all like “dood that is fucking fantastic!” Never seen that before in a story and I think it really illustrates what kind of a psychotic giantess we are dealing with. I wouldn’t want to be tiny around her, that’s for sure.

Dayum. That ending was too perfect. This was a well written story with a fantastic set of characters. Great job!