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I've come to realize that I'm really bad at coming back to stories later on to continue them. So here's a relatively short, complete 4 chapter story :p

 

 


 

"Thanks for helping me move out man. It just had to be this weekend; or else I'd have to deal with my Mom trying to talk me out of it the entire time" Jake says, as he loads up the last of his posessions into the trunk of his car.

"Hey no problem! it's good that you get away from her; she's waaay to possesive of you. It'll be good for both of you to have some space" His new roomate replies, as they drive off towards the shrinking facility

"Are you really sure about this whole shrinking thing though? As much as I enjoy the idea of never having to work again and living the rest of my life in luxary, being at the size of a germ seems a bit dangerous, don't you think?" Jake says with concern

"Nah, it should be fine dude. They like *never* have incidents at the places, it'll be great! And besides, it's either this, or get a job in retail like everyone else. This is totally the better option lol" he says, as he steers his car towards the shrinking gate; a shimmering wall spanning the width of a road, in which everything that enters gets permanently shrunk to microscopic scale

"Well, when you put it that way..."

"Cmon dude, it'll be great! You'll see!"

"if you say so" 

And with a flash, the entire world around them expands to an incomprehensible size. Other random objects that had blown through the gate by coincidence litter the otherwise nearly spotless area, which is otherwise an endless plain of reflective tile floor. The unnervingly quiet calm is short lived for the boys however, as a 'massive' drone type vehicle swoops down from the heavens, and grips the now microscopic car, lifting them up and away

Gripping the door handle as the G-Force increases, jake makes the mistake of looking down; beginning their hour-long trip up to the planet. "Bwuh... does it have to take so *long* though? I-I'm afraid of heights man"

"Well yeah, any faster and the forces would hurt us! It should be fine though, once we get in range of the City-Planet's artifical gravity. Speaking of..." He points, the magnificent blue-green, half metropolis covered planet getting larger and larger by the minute. The gentle swaying of their lift up to it, and the view of simple furniture and computer consoles the size of celestial objects, really driving home just how absolutely miniscule their new scale is

"Wow..."

Much later, the two of them approach the little planet, and the massive veil protecting it from the outside world. A hatch slowly opens at their approach; large enough to fit much more than a single car. The two of them gasp in unison, as they see the breathtaking view below them. The well organized, prestine civilization sprawling out before them in organized cities, lush rainforests, and all the bells and whistles that come with a world designed from the ground up. Finally, they get dropped off by the lift; in front of their new lavish country home

"Yeah, you were right man, I think this is was totally worth it~"

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