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Author's Chapter Notes:

This chapter was fun to pump out as I haven't really done this sotroy in a while. I've decided to write my stories in bulk now so that I can just release them at regular intervals and still be able to rest when I need to. I've already written extra chapters for all of my other stories. But now I'm completely beat.

The girls toilets were in complete chaos as the titanic goddess continued to stride across the room and had already claimed a victim, although this girl was actually still alive. Every action this giantess took was like a force of nature for all teh tiny inhabitants and they could only pray that she would not unknowingly take their lives. Soon, however, it became apparent that the woman was looking for a stall to do her business in but every single one was occupied.

This is what was known to the shrunken people. They knew that each stall was being used and all contained trapped people, however this news was unknown to Jane who wore an angered look on her face. She muttered to herself about someone playing a practical joke and about how the stalls were actually all vacant, resulting in her getting on her hands and knees to unlock the nearest door.

All the tiny people knew what she was about to unknowingly do and tried fruitlessly to grab her attention. Screaming from a top the cupboards, sinks and floor they all tried to stop her from entering the stall and shutting it behind her. They all silently prayed that the person trapped within there got out of it safely instead of facing a horrible death. The occupant, however, had no such luck.

The person who was using that stall was a young teenage girl, Jasmine, who had come to the pool with her boyfriend. She had rosy red hair and a tall, firm figure who was a complete beauty to look at. She had entered the stall to do her business and had just finished flushing the handle when she felt the strange sensation and blacked out. When she awoke she found herself trapped on the never ending landscape of the toilet seat covered in the water her body and drizzled on it.

She had sat there for what seemed like forever trying to think of a way to get out of this situation. She knew that with a problem this big then someone should be coming to help her, after all people don't just shrink out of the blue. She just hoped that the person noticed her and didn't just squash her under their weight. The teenage girl was obviously oblivious to the fact that everyone at the pool except for a family of girls had shrunk and so no one would be coming to rescue her.

Her heart still lifted when she heard an thumping sound resonating through the floor like an earth quake that was coming closer and closer until her whole world was being repeatedly shaken with every thump. Not only that but she could clearly hear the person right outside her stall and was filled with joy and knowing she was about to be saved. She was quite shocked when she saw the gigantic figure crawl under the door but then realized that the door was still locked so this was really the only way the woman to get in.

Once inside the stall the woman turned around and unlocked the stall and peaked outside for some reason. While she was turned the young teen caught sight of the woman's huge behind which would actually look very shapely and good looking at normal size. However, Jasmine only cared about how the behind had the power to crush her into oblivion if she the woman decided to sit down and knew that she needed to get her attention.

Jane shut the door and turned around to look at the seat, much to the hope of Jasmine. She wanted the older lady to actually looked down rather than simply use the toilet and began to frantically wave her arms in the air trying to grab any attention. Jasmine stopped moving, however, when she saw the look of disgust on the woman's face and was afraid the woman might kill her for unknown reason and jumped when she moved her arm. But the titanic beauty was only going for toilet paper to use to clean up the mess that Jasmine had left.

Jasmine's face turned red as she watched the woman clean up the water she had left behind but her expression quickly changed when she saw the toilet paper approaching her. The young girl screamed and ran in the opposite direction moving her legs as fast as they could go but it was completely useless. The toilet paper rammed into her back like a train and the soaked tissue quickly wrapped around her and drew her into it folds. 

Jasmine found herself completely stuck in the mesh of white terrain and water continued to flood into her surroundings and almost drown her. She had to get her attention before the woman -

Suddenly the woman threw the toilet paper into the air and Jasmine was able to see that it was heading straight for the toilet bowl. She almost threw up in her mouth as she thought about landing in that bowl after she had done her business in it. However, she was too afraid from thinking about being trapped in it while this huge older woman did her business. How could she ever get the woman's attention now?

The toilet paper hit the water with a thick sloshing sound which was only audible to the tiny speck Jasmine. As the paper began to sink it slowly tore up allowing Jasmine to force her way out of the confines and into open water. She escaped just in time to see the sky blocked out by a giant dark figure which seemed to cut out almost all light, leaving the shrunken girl in the darkness.

"No! Please, help!" She screamed up at the giant bottom of Jane "There's a person down here, HELP!" however, the younger girls voice didn't even leave the toilet bowl let alone reaching all the way up to Jane's ears.

Jane began to relax as she felt the pee begin to rush through her body and leave. The urine seemed to be only a small amount of liquid to her but to the trapped girl it was nothing less than a waterfall. The scariest thing was that she couldn't even see it, only hear, feel and smell as it collided with the water causing gigantic ripples which rushed towards Jasmine.

Jasmine tried her best to stay afloat in the water but the urine just kept on coming creating bigger and bigger waves until Jasmine was finally forced under the water, unable to resurface until Jane finished. When the waterfall of piss did come to a halt Jasmine was able to break the surface and filled her lungs with fresh oxygen. However, she didn't find any of that in her surroundings as the strong and overwhelming aroma of ammonia filled her senses.

Gagging on the stench, Jasmine couldn't believe that the smell could be so strong but guessed that because of her size the smell must be somehow magnified. But her troubles had far from faded as the humongous figure of the older woman did not leave the sky and continued to darken Jasmines world. That could only mean she had more business to take care of. 

Jane was sitting on the toilet and had just finished urinating when she went to grab some toilet paper. However, she then felt a strong push coming from within her body and immediately understood what it meant. Putting the toilet paper down she began to focus and push as her bowels began to push its contents out.

Jasmine was first showed that something else was coming when she heard a splash coming from somewhere in the distance. Shortly after she heard another but was closer and seemed bigger and she knew that she was being dumped on. Looking up into the sky she started screaming her lungs out only to be ignored by the above goddess. Screaming was also bad because if forced her to breath and the air had changed rapidly from urine to shit causing further intensified gagging.

Jane continued to push the smaller masses out until the big snakes arrived and she really started putting the effort in. She slowly felt the large turds begin to exit her body one at a time completely unaware of the horrible treatment she was putting the much younger girl through.

Jasmine was getting very tired of swimming and knew that she couldn't keep it up for long. As if answering her needs she felt a small landmass approach her and she immediately knew what it was- a turd. However, this was the biggest piece of shit she had ever seen and even though it was almost pitch black she knew that it was huge. Mentally forcing herself to do it she conceded that she either climbed this or drowned and so decided to live and little longer and begin climbing.

The smell was possibly the worst thing she had ever smelt as she was literally riding a giant turd across a toilet bowl. She looked up and tried to see when she was when she heard a horrifying splash coming from next to her. This splash was bigger than anyone she had heard so far and knew it must have come from a huge piece of poop. Even from the little bit of light that did make it into the bowl she could see the size.

The true horror started however when another landed on her other side and than another collided with the turd she was sailing sending her flying right into the middle of the goliath land masses. She didn't know it just yet but she was slowly being encased in a tomb of shit as Jane naturally went about her business. Jasmine was also finding it almost impossible to breath properly as her lungs began to burn with a painful feeling as she continued to inhale the toxic fumes.

She couldn't come up with any way of possibly escaping her fate and the realization of what had happened to her quickly hit her like a train. collapsing into the fecal matter she was standing on she broke down in tears as a turd landed directly on top of the other ones creating a rooftop to completely seal Jasmine in. Now she was not only dying from the smell but the radiating heats emanating from all around her.

Jane finished her dump and drew and few pieces of toilet paper and wiped her butt-hole until she was satisfied that it was clean. throwing the paper into the bowl she stood up and looked at her handiwork. A nice little dome which looked almost like a house. Just before she pulled the handle she wished that the person who had caused the mess on the seat would get some kind of punishment before pushing and watching as the water dragged her poop and its inhabitants into the sewers.

Chapter End Notes:

I need sleep. It's one in the morning. Sleep.

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