1. Chrome by Saf [Reviews - 9] (2914 words)
Finally the first chapter of my first story. I probably did something wrong while submitting, and I haven't edited this for awhile, so it probably has a few mistakes. Thanks for reading!
2. Iodine by Saf [Reviews - 2] (894 words)
The story is continued with a lot of background information on the human and why his personality is the way it is.
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3. Titanium by Saf [Reviews - 3] (596 words)
4. Carbon by Saf [Reviews - 5] (628 words)
I decided to upload another chapter today. Enjoy! (Guess who was right about predicting the next chapter name?)
5. Aluminium by Saf [Reviews - 5] (820 words)
6. Critical by Saf [Reviews - 2] (582 words)
Wow. I'm back. Honestly, I'm surprised myself. I haven't updated this for months. However, my writing skills have improved, and I noticed many people on this site have not been posting stories satisfactory to my interests, so I'm moving forward with this. I considered abandoning it for a long time.
I read all of the reviews, and I just want to say that if you're looking for a "wankfest", you're not going to find it here, nor in any of my stories. I'm a very modest person and that content does not often appeal to me. I am writing this story according to my own interests, and if you do not share them, seek elsewhere.
Lastly, since I do believe I have improved my writing abilities, I will be making changes to my previous chapters to create a better flow. I don't know when I will, nor how soon, but be on the lookout for it. As of now, I have read back on my writing and I have prewritten this next chapter. I will be revising it, but otherwise posting as-is, so it may follow quality according to my previous chapters (which are painlly short, I've noticed.) I think it is because certain parts I want to have shown in the other character's view, and it isn't always long. Unfortunately I have forgotten my master plan for the periodic table thing (CrITiCAl, as you may have now figured out.) Enjoy this terribly short chapter with the promise that I will add another chapter very soon!
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7. Chapter 7 by Saf [Reviews - 4] (927 words)
Oh geez, an update from me. Surprising, right? I wanted to do this sooner, but so much stuff is going on asdfasfgfa. Sorry about the chapter thing.
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