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Reviewer: Pallasx1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2024 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I wouldn’t mind another one set in this world from Sarah’s point of view 


or maybe a man that was caught and sold by the bounty hunters. Is there a way I could commission it?



Author's Response: Hit me up at joycejulep@gmail.com to discuss <3 

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

New world order stories are awesome especially the worlds women gets bigger and hotter!

I wish to see a world where all mature moms and milfs grows twice size bigger and sexier!

Reviewer: MysticCrunk Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2022 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sarah may have gone through Warren's medical records and done some investigation to discover he was the wealthy descendant of his father's estate. Do you think she's doing this for Irina so she can extort money from them later? Or does she simply like playing with new favorites and making matches for couples she wants to change and add to her list of playmates? I have no idea.

Is there a correlation between the size of a man and when he began drinking contaminated milk? It seemed that Eddie was smaller because he had been afflicted the longest and hadn't sought medical attention? Does this suggest that Warren, assuming he was 3'6" when he began milking, is unlikely to shrink more than 3 feet?

My question is whether or not Sarah would inform Irina that she saved him, in the midst of being arrested by male hunters, when he ran away. It's possible that Sarah will corrupt Irina if she attempts to be gentle with him, encouraging her to use force and start physically controlling him in order for him to cooperate and not run away from her.

The designer of the renderings of nurse Sarah while she was muscular but nevertheless human-sized in Jeff Stintum's Training of Jeff Stintum is unknown to me, nor is her whereabouts. Do you have any idea who's been doing Sarah fan art or commissions?



Author's Response:

Hi MysticCrunk!  Sorry I'm just now seeing your comment, lol -- as to your question, I know there was an artist named twitch on Amazonlove who had done those renders, which I liked VERY much.  Is there other fan art of Sarah out there?  If so, I'd love to see it! <3 

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

this story is amazing. cant wait for the final chapter

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2021 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope now that Warren has been returned, Irina will learn to dominate him more for his own protection. I am sure Sarah could teach her.  Also, Aly Singleton and the local news team could do a report on new produccts (leashes, gadgets, women's fashions, etc.) designed to prevent shrunken men from running away.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment Shaka!  And yes, I think you'll find that some of your ideas eventually come to fruition in the story :) 

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2021 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hmm, so did Sarah look through Warren's medical files and research him to realize he was a rich heir? I'm curious if she's going through all this effort for Irina to be able to extort money from them later, or if she just likes toying with new favorites or playing matchmaker for couple she wants to turn and add to her list of playmates.

And is there a stablizing link between how small men get and when they started to drink an infected woman's milk? Eddie seemed to be the smallest because he'd gone the longest infected without turning to a hospital or wooman for treatment? Does this mean Warren probably won't shrink beyond 3' if he was 3'6" when he started milking?

I wonder if Irina will want to coddle him or punish him for running away, given Sarah may tell her she rescued him in the act of being captured by men hunters. And if Irina tries to stay gentle with him, if Sarah will instead corrupt her by telling her she needs to force her will on him and start physically dominating him if she wants to encourage him to behave and not try to avoid or run away from her.

P.S. I know I saw renders of nurse Sarah when she was muscular but still normalish human size in the Training of Jeff Stintum but I don't remeber if it where it was (giantess city, deviantart, etc..) or who the creator was. Do you happen to know who made fan art or commissions of Sarah?



Author's Response:

Hi sandman579!  Thanks so much for your comment!  You ask some intriguing questions, all of which will eventually be asnwered in the story :) 

I think the renders you're thinking of were made by Twitch on the Amazonlove forum.  I LOVED them, and was immensely flatered that he took the time to render them <3 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2021 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope they find the cure in your story. But I'm affraid the cliche. "Women will get everything", instead of a "good story, where justice is served" will win out.

All women acting exactly the same as if the time before never existed is not exciting. 



Author's Response:

Sorry the story isn't exciting to you...but it is to me, lol ;) 

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2021 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Just perfect 

Reviewer: Twjr0228 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2021 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your story has such a great premise!

Reviewer: BenX21 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2021 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

I like this story more than any of your works. Shy millionaire and caring housekeeper, great mix. I would also not mind if she showed some dominance, but in small doses.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2021 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

I was a bit skeptical at first, but you're winning me over!

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

omg I love it. :) 'matronly caretaker' has a lot of appeal for me in general in this genre. Will check out your patreon.

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