Date: January 05 2021 10:26 PM Title: The Session
I just binge-read this whole story, and... I'm in love with it!
The premise of the wrongly convicted young man rescued and smuggled out by his lovely would-be executioner is really interesting!
Brian and Allie are so adorable! Their dynamic is so sweet and cute, and I am rooting for them/shipping them so hard!
I must admit that, when I saw "Gentle", "Feet", and "Humiliation" in the tags, I was hoping for some teasing footplay from Allie, but with Brian's asexuality, that kind of play wouldn't be as intimate as I like, but it could still be affectionate, playful, and fun! (I must say that I enjoyed it when Brian was kissing Allie's toes, but it wasn't exactly under ideal circumstances... ^^; )
Also, speaking of Brian and Allie's sexualities as their relationship deepens, it makes me wonder what Allie's "second goal" is... ;)
In any case, I am intensely curious to see this story continue!
I wanna know what's about to happen in the aftermath of the "session", and overall how/if Allie will ever clear Brian's name so that they can get their happily ever after without having to hide!
Maybe Brian himself will become famous after the world realizes his heartbreaking story and sympathizes with the handsome young man who's now sentenced to live the rest of his life smaller than a mouse for a crime he never committed. I also wonder what their reaction to Allie would be. The brave, beautiful young woman who risked it all for the little man. Maybe the public would come to adore their story, and they'd become a cute celebrity couple of sorts, with their voices becoming the strongest in advocating against the Shrink Penalty??
But now I'm specualting... Maybe they'll have to stay in hiding forever, and Brian will go down in history as a heartless child murderer... :(
I hope not, though!
In any case, this story is wonderful! It's one of those stories on here that I enjoy simply for its own sake! I'm embarrassed to admit, but I ususally only come to this website to... get some relief (as Allie put it, lol ^^; ), so I am genuinely and pleasantly surprised when I find a story that I enjoy for the story and the characters! Definitely going in my "adorable fluff that makes me sqee" folder!!! ;)
Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading this story! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the premise and characters. I hope you enjoy the way Allison and Brian's relationship develops from here! We'll find out what Allison's new goal was pretty soon.
There are definitely a few ways this story can progress in regards to clearing Brian's name (or not). I hope you like the way it proceeds!
I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying this story for the story and characters! It means a lot that people are enjoying this story beyond the fetish content. I'm honored to contribute to your fluff folder!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 4:15 PM Title: The Session
Come on, that was a walk in the park. That must dawn on Cathy as well. Time for round two. That's the thing about their arrangement: Allie is almost as much at Cathy's mercy as Brian. There's no time limit, no turn limit - strictly speaking there isn't even a weight limit outside of Allie physically stopping Cathy and shooting her job and probably her life as well as Brian's to the wind. (I mean, unless Cathy somehow ends up dead or God-forbid on the wrong end of the Silver Strip)
Meanwhile, Allie has to start and make Brian at home. Cathy's intent on teaching Allie bears some intrigues, I think. Plenty of room for things to go even more wrong. I'd love some more world building to really get into the ethics of that whole death penalty 2.0 thing. Might just be something for Brian to spend his time on while Allie is away.
Great work as usual.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Yes, Allison and Brian have to figure out how to deal with Cathy's future sessions. It can only get worse from here, and a lot can go wrong if Allison refuses to indulge her.
There's definitely a lot of room for more worldbuilding! I probably won't get into all of it before this story ends, but maybe in another story. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, and I hope you like what happens next!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 1:50 PM Title: The Session
I can see you put a ton of work into this chapter, and it clearly paid off. Well-down. As a reader/fan of Brian, I'm hoping he's actually innocent. I mean, even if he wasn't, I don't believe in cruel and unusual punishment (no matter how satisfying it may seem in certain scenarios). I also realize the grayness of life, and how a seemingly good person can do terrible things. But still, I just don't see how Brian could do something like that. There's been no evidence throughout and I feel like we'd catch a small glimpse of something off. So yeah, I'm hoping as a reader and for the story that he is in fact innocent but perhaps harbors the guilt of not being able to save him. I want the happy ending with him and Allie. Also I don't buy the whole asexuality thing with him. It's a mental front. Something related either to past trauma, or experience to protect himself. It's learned and something I hope you explore with Allie, where she successfully breaks through.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Yes, this chapter was particularly tough for me to figure out how to do right. That's why there was a (relatively) long delay. I'm really glad that you and others have enjoyed it!
Brian's response to the session will be explained in the next chapter! I hope you find it interesting. There certainly is more evidence than not that he didn't commit the crime, but his reaction was questionable.
I hope you enjoy where the story goes from here!
-Pluto
Date: January 05 2021 12:43 PM Title: The Session
Brilliant chapter! really glad Allie didn't end up enjoying torturing Brian.
I have to admit, the part where Brian got really ticked off by them calling him a child murdered has me a bit anxious...! It's got me thinking that maybe he isn't innocent after all, which would really suck but that's the only reason I can think of that justifies his emotions since Allie knnows he's innocent therefore why should he care what Cathy thinks? :( unless of course if you somehow manage to make him guilty but also make him still end up with Allie... As you can tell I'm rooting for Brian to get the girl!
Excited to see how the story progresses! keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing again! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and the fact that Allison is not going down a sadistic route.
Yes, Brian's response to the torment is definitely odd. It will all be explained next chapter! I hope you like what happens.
-Pluto
Date: January 05 2021 12:12 PM Title: The Session
Damn, this was a great chapter (as all of them have been)
But had some great content (Personally I loved the feet scenes XD)
Plus seeing Cathy's tactics and torture methods beyond just the physical, when she kept emotionally attacking him about the 'murder'
Part of me wants Cathy to get some redemption, actually learning the truth about Brian and helping allison.
But at the same time, I doubt you're going to go that route.
Am excited to see the next chapter however :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing again! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yes, I wanted to show how Cathy will jump on any method of torture that she thinks is most effective, mental or physical. I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
-Pluto