Date: January 06 2021 3:20 PM Title: The Discovery
I need to admit that when the previous chapter finished, I literally thought "If I were Brian, I would act as if Allie was torturing me", it took me completely by surprise when you did exactly that same thing xD
Great chapter, keep going!
Author's Response:
Great minds think alike! By that I mean yours and Brian's, of course. Thanks for reading!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 04 2021 3:10 PM Title: The Discovery
Uh-oh... Not gonna lie, it was more or less clear that this was going to happen, but it ain't bad. I wonder what Allison actually did with her cellphone. She wouldn't mess with the timer, now, would she?
Anyhow, looking forward to a long 10 minutes for Brian. The real question is whether Allison will like it. I saw Brian stuck having to find something new to give his life meaning. Looks like he's receiving some help with that.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2021 9:18 PM Title: The Discovery
Totally see how the car ride scene from Spider-Man: Homecoming served as inspiration. I lied, I like where this is going. As long as Allie and Brian survive with a happy ending I'm good lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I have to admit, after your review for the last chapter I was a little concerned that people wouldn't like the direction I had planned for this encounter. I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it! I hope you like where it goes from here.
-Pluto
Date: January 02 2021 3:38 PM Title: The Discovery
I usually skip stories that don't contain any boot/boot crush content as I love reading about that, but for some reason your story seemed... different! I gave it a try and I have to say it got me hooked fairly quick!
I love the development of the characters and the dynamic they bring to the story.
Brian being full on against the SPAR and cathy being the devil's advocate while having Allie on the middle ground gives an incredible plot to the story!
While I usually love the cruelty factor and I deeply appreciate Cathy for her cold bloodedness, I have to admit I am heavily on Brian and Allie's side on this story, I love how Allie is slowly backing away from her job as she realizes the potential for fraud executions and how Brian has managed to change her, I feel as if if she continued to do her job normally that would be unfair towards Brian in so many ways.. I also love how you managed to incorpotate the erotic dynamic/tension in the mix without straight up having them hook up and fuck within the confines of one chapter.
I can safely say that I'm excited for the next chapter, and honestly I do hope nothing changes with Allie and her beliefs remain the same, on the contrary I would be interested to see whether or not Cathy somehow changes her beliefs, or if she ends up getting a taste of her own medicine, so to speak..
As you can tell I think this is a story where I'm rooting for the good guys! And I for sure didn't expect to like a non-boot story so much! Regardless, I'm really looking forward to see what's gonna happen next...!
Keep up the awesome work, and thanks for the frequent updates!
PS. this is purely out of curiosity as I don't really care for giant content, but are chevaliers exclusively female or are there male ones as well?
-HOZANGA
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Thank you so much for giving this story a shot, and I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. I'm happy you're enjoying the characters and the moral debate around the Shrink Penalty, with Brian and Cathy on the opposite ends of the spectrum.
I'm also glad to hear that you're on the side of the heroes! Yes, Allison's views on the SP were definitely challenged by her decision to save Brian. As explored in their argument, Brian certainly wouldn't have been able to rest easy if nothing changed. As for their relationship, I thought it would be fun to build it up relatively slowly. I hope you enjoy how it's developed from here!
This upcoming session can go a few different ways for sure. It will be a pretty crucial event in the story. For your question, if you remember from chapter 9 when Allison returns to the facility, she decides to walk down the hallway towards her SPAR and she takes note of the Chevaliers she sees. Some of them are male. The SP does not discriminate! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 02 2021 1:03 PM Title: The Discovery
Now this definitely an interesting turn of events. I hope this doesn't awaken anything in Allison. I'm wondering what this ten minute session will result in, and whether Cathy is going to want to end it after such a short time. Also, I wonder how Brian is going to hold up. Usually if a tiny dies because their body isn't tough enough to handle what's happening, it's probably a "too bad so sad" kind of thing where the Chevalier is annoyed that they didn't last a whole session but it's no big deal. In this case, Allison has to try and ensure that he survives without giving away that she cares about him. I guess I'll find out what's going to happen in the next chapter. Thus far the story has surprised me in a good way.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continued reviews! I'm glad I've been able to surprise you. Allison is in a very difficult spot with this session, for sure. It's definitely true that Chevaliers aren't careful about injuring convicts, since the worst case is that they are executed a little earlier. I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto