[Report This]Date: December 17 2020 1:54 AM Title: The Meeting
Great start! I was interested in the premise of the first 2 chapters, however, this chapter singel handedly sold me on the story. I love the power dynamic between the two main characters, I really enjoyed the fact that Brian was able to take hold of the conversation between him and allison despite the size disadvantage, and I loved seeing her show some compassion for the first time in the story. I can only hope that Allison and Brian's relationship will improve and be developed further. I'm excited to see what comes next. As Palpatine once said, "we will watch your career with great interest."
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying Allison and Brian's interactions. I hope you enjoy the way their relationship develops. As for the Palpatine quote, I only hope this doesn't mean I'll eventually become Darth Vader x_x
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 5:56 PM Title: The Meeting
This story is really interesting. Is great to found plot focused stories in the site more than pure fetish content.
I'll be following your work pretty closely~
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I hope I can look forward to more of your reviews!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 2:09 PM Title: The Meeting
Wow what an awesome chapter! I really hope she does the right thing. Can't wait to read the next chapter, especially after that cliffhanger lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Like I mentioned in the end notes, my poor brain definitely needs a short break, but I'll have the next chapter up pretty soon.
-Pluto