[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 7:54 PM Title: The Plea
Made an account just to review this! Excellent first story so far, really interested to see where it'll go from here.
Author's Response:
I'm honored!! Thank you so much for making an account just to review this. The nice things people have been saying in these reviews are making me so happy. I hope you'll continue to enjoy my story.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 5:44 PM Title: The Plea
Good story. I wonder what will happen if he's not dead after 60 minutes. Then again, if they can eat their 'customers' and there are no cameras, it doesn't seem like evidence of the killing is necessarily required. This could shape up to be something truly remarkable.
One sidenote, which you may or may not pick up: given the track record of courts and the death penalty in general, there is an incredibly high chance that Allison has killed innocent people before. Perhaps she'll realize that in time. Where's one, there's usually more, after all.
Cheers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Both very astute observations.
Your sidenote in particular is one of the things that inspired me to write this story. Last semester, I had two classes that both had separate units on capital punishment. History, why people do/don't support it, efficacy, etc. Two important questions that need to be answered, in my opinion, to come up with a verdict on capital punishment are:
1) How effective is capital punishment as a deterrent to crime?
2) How many people are put to death for crimes they did not commit?
The second question inspired me to write a shrinking-based story to explore that. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 4:49 PM Title: The Plea
Here are your 10 stars, hoping this story to last very very long :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm very happy you're enjoying it. I can't say exactly how many chapters this story will be, but we've still got a long ways to go.
-Pluto
Date: December 16 2020 4:48 PM Title: The Plea
"This was not a scream.
This was not a cry.
This was a whisper, a soft declaration of innocence to an empty and uncaring universe."
My favourite quote from the latest chapter. He's reacting stoically, though, in the end he still cries, bcause he's human and he has feelings, no matter how strong his will is.
Date: December 15 2020 6:02 PM Title: The Plea
LOL
I tought the first chapter was the final one, as the self-proclaimed innocent man was squished, but it was not him!
Let's see if she has some feelings or is cold at all
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted the first chapter to seem like it was the whole story, based on the description. But it actually was only part 1/2 of the prologue! Thank you for reading.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 12:44 PM Title: The Plea
Well I'm hooked!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Thank you for reading.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 3:33 AM Title: The Plea
enjoyed this a lot I really like dark ironic unfair plots hope to see more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. As a matter of fact, I just uploaded the second chapter, so I hope you will enjoy it as well!
-Pluto
Date: December 14 2020 11:51 PM Title: The Plea
This was wuite intresting id love to eee more maybe get her with someone whos actually inocent
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! There's definitely more to come. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 14 2020 3:42 PM Title: The Plea
I absolutely love this story idea. I would love to see more chapters in this genre, ,all innocent, and then having girls be the executonor, in different ways maybe shrinking them very small to ant size, butt insertion, death by taking a shit on them, oral vore, fed to a dog, burned alive, so many ways. I love this story idea!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for my first review! I'm so glad that you like the story idea. It definitely lends itself to all sorts of scenarios. I hope you'll continue to read!
-Pluto