[Report This]Date: February 09 2023 8:05 PM Title: The Plea
Wicked story but what about the Innocence part !????????
[Report This]Date: November 19 2021 3:17 AM Title: The Plea
This story completely took me by surprise, so much so that I made an account just to review it. This may seem a bit silly, but when you're in this community your expectations for any genuinely gripping stories go down the drain after looking for so long. However, there are a few hidden gems like this one that make the search feel oh so worth it. Quite frankly, this might be the best size story I've ever read for a multitude of reasons, though it also has a few downsides that take away from the story once everything comes to a climax. Keep in mind that all of my criticism comes without reading the second or third parts since I want to review it standalone before moving on. I hope it serves some use to you, dear writer.
The balance of this story is what makes it really powerful in my opinion. Oftentimes stories of this kind are either extremely fluffy while lacking any form of tension, or are extremely tense and gritty while lacking any real substance. Of course both of these stories are fine. One is used as a comfort tool, the other for sexual fulfillment. Though I've found myself not being too fond of either as I've grown into adulthood over the years. Something like this which feels very genuine and humane while also accepting the grim reality of the situation is extremely rare, and the chapters of varying tones make it feel very tangible. If the intention was for a bait and switch, you very much did a good job of building up very common size tropes and deconstructing them to make for very interesting dilemmas and conversation within the story. The respect and seriousness with which they were treated (Such as the morbid nature of the shrink punishment and the actions of the Chev's) only helps to accentuate it. This story's premise stripped of Allie's heroism is a basis for many cruel fetish stories, so seeing something like that turned on its head with seemingly deliberate ruses to make the reader believe they were reading one only furthered my investment once I realized what it was really about. Allie's breakdown as she came to question the system she was brainwashed into believing was infallible while constantly feeding herself delusions as time went on felt so authentic. Minus a very minute number of grievances, it was probably the point where I felt most invested. I was absolutely on the edge of my seat for that encounter scene as well.
Brian and Allie's interactions helped tie it all together very neatly. The utter goofiness and positivity of it was really surprising to me upon first read, and only helped further my love for the budding potential of this story. Going from something so utterly terrifying and emotional to simply watching movies and poking fun at each other felt so human. I almost forgot that Allie was naming off morbid ways to kill him only days ago, and that's how life often goes. The pacing of everything overall felt quite good, and the way they reacted felt pretty believable despite the short passage of time. Even that gets acknowledged as just being a matter of Allie's utter loneliness driving her to be very fast to cling onto Brian. Everything slowly building up until the explosive argument was great too, the argument itself being one of my favorite scenes.
One of the smaller issues I had was the constant need to reference specific events that influenced a character's decision. Such as "Allie sighed, if the reader remembered x thing happened yesterday." It's slightly understandable because of the serial nature of the series, though I feel it's a bit excessive at times and strips the reader of the satisfaction of connecting the dots themselves. At times the world can sometimes feel a bit too grim and unrealistic, I can chalk up some things to Allie's perception, but things like Brian's spat with his mom felt like a bit much. Every other Chevalier being in complete agreement with the system and relishing in their job, the unanimous degree to which certain people and groups can be evil and malicious. Again, I haven't read the other parts so I am merely cracking it up to Allie and Brian's perception. Hopefully it gets rectified as I read on. I think my biggest problem however, has to be character dialogue when anyone is stressed and brought to a boiling point. I stated earlier that the interactions and dialogue are one of the high points, but it feels that the same language and lines were repeated quite a bit when expressing primal anger. Fuck and other swears are repeated to the point that their reactions often feel homogeneous. The abundance of it in certain scenes feels extremely juvenile and it makes it hard for me to fully take it seriously and strip the previously mentioned believability of the scenario away. I think the part in which it hit its peak is a certain scene in chapter 12, I think you'd know the one. Switching to using sharper words that aren't curses, simply accentuating certain words, and many other methods could be used to solve this pretty easily. People react very differently to situations like these. Some things also felt a tad ham-fisted in the delivery, but that was very rare so it didn't bug me all too much.
All in all, the story itself was very inspiring for my own writing. I hope I can inspire others to realize that size and G/t can be more than fetish fuel or shallow fluff. It can make for very interesting dynamics and stories that otherwise wouldn't be made possible. Thank you for writing this wonderful little story, I look forward to the rest.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the extremely detailed and kind review!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story, and I'm honored that it inspired you to create an account. I'm even more honored to hear that you think this might be one of the best size stories you've ever read, I can't tell you how much that means to me. Absolutely, all feedback and criticisms are helpful to writers (so long as they're delivered constructively, which yours absolutely are), so thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I'll respond to a few of your points!
Definitely, subversion was one of my main goals when writing this story. You can see that with the first chapter, but also in the ways you described regarding genre and size tropes. Like you, I've always felt that this genre offers so much potential for unique and interesting stories that go beyond the realm of erotica. What I ultimately wanted to write about was the relationship between Allison and Brian, and how their unique circumstances, as well as his size, affect it. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the balance between cruel and gentle, and that you felt it worked in the story's favor. My one true love when writing is gentle content, but I felt the cruel content/setting was just as important to tell the story that I wanted to. Although my other stories are more firmly rooted in the gentle world, I hope that you will still feel the sense of tension and conflict that I tried to have in this one!
Like I said, their relationship was what I wanted to write about, so I'm really really glad that you enjoyed it! You're right on with your observations on the contrasting tone of their fluffy chapters versus the earlier ones, and that's definitely what I was going for! And absolutely, I thought the fact that they were both extremely lonely would help explain their quick bond, despite the short amount of time that had passed. Although I may have hated writing the argument, 'cause that's no fun, I also feel like it turned out well! I'm glad you enjoyed that scene as well.
In regard to your criticisms, I think everything you've pointed out are valid flaws that I've even noticed myself as time has gone on! This was my first attempt at crafting a full on story, size or not, and there are a lot of areas where I think that shines through. I hope that I've improved since then (although I might still be a tad liberal with the curse words when people get upset), and I hope that some of your story grievances are addressed by the sequels! Just on the point of cursing, though, the point was definitely to make them appear juvenile. In my experience, people curse a lot when engaging in those type of explosive arguments, as that kind of intense anger can strip people of their reservations and restraints. I try (emphasis on try) to write dialogue in a more naturalistic way (like writing out "um" and "like" occasionally), so I was just writing that kind of anger as I saw it happening in my mind. If the scene in chapter 12 you're referring to is the one with Laura, though, that was actually slightly more intentional. What I was going for there was the idea that Brian might have actually gotten some of his explosive tendencies, as well as his sailor mouth while doing so, from his mom. Anyway, not saying you have to agree with my rationalizations (or even that they're good ones), but that's what I was thinking as I was writing. Like I said, I can only hope that I've improved since then!
Anyway, I would be so incredibly honored if I helped inspire your own writing at all! It sounds like we share a few values when it comes to this genre, so I'd be very curious to see what kind of stories you write! I'll keep an eye out for your name. Thank you so much again for the review, and I really hope you enjoy the next story! Don't feel compelled at all, but if you're so inclined I would love to hear your thoughts on what happens next. Either way, I really appreciate the review, and best of luck with your own writing!! Take care.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: May 29 2021 4:07 AM Title: The Plea
It took me far too long to get around to reading this. Namely because I had a sneaking suspicion that I might become obsessed once I started. So, here I am, about four hours later after starting this series, leaving a review. The 80th review, if I'm not mistaken! Congratulations, you've earned the milestone!
I'm a bit of a coward-- the cruel encounters and actions in this story were relatively tame compared to some other titles, such as the actions of the Chevs or the encounter with Cathy in what was supposed to be a safe haven. You really had me bashing my head against my pillow at one point, but that just goes to show the power someone's writing can have on another! You create emotions from thin air, or in my case, a small phone screen.
But... The cute interactions between Allie and Brian were a big hook for me. I actually smiled a great deal throughout my initial foray into this story. I'm a sucker for gentle encounters, and plot driven stuff works well with it! I had questions, and you routinely answered all of them (maybe except working out how Brian uses the bathroom on his own, but honestly I don't mind if you never explain that lmao).
One more thing I'd like to compliment is explaining the characters' mental thoughts and reactions to events. On several occasions it was really charming to see Allie fret and become flustered on her own mistakes, and really regretting some of it heavily. Something about a guilty giantess resonates within me. Having Allie constantly worried about Brian's mental health and 'how he would take things' was very sweet of her character.
I certainly hope they continue to flourish and grow together, and work on becoming more honest and careful. It was a bit hard for me to read through the argument chapter, mainly because I'm so conflict-avoidant. But it seems everything turned out alright in the end!
Also, I liked the idea of them just taking the day off in the weekend chapters. So comfy to read through that.
You have more strength than I do, in your ability to start and flesh out a story. I'm jealous on that word count haha. But, I know what it's like to start a chapter and not want to break it up into sections. When I typed the long-since-deleted Asher's Small Lifestyle Change story, I think I typed a sixteen thousand word final chapter. My fingers hurt for awhile after that, and I started to tone it down a lot ever since.
One more thing, I added you to my favorite authors with a small caption. Go and read it, should you fancy to..!
And, seeing as there's more stories to read on this series, I guess that means...
This review is not over!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review!! I'm really happy to see a review from you, it means a lot. Also, thank you very much for the 80th review!
I'm honestly not a huge fan of cruel stuff either, despite what this story might suggest. This is an example where the cruel stuff was included to fit the world/create drama. Even Cathy's session was created less because I enjoy that type of content, and more so because it would cause Brian's breakdown. Which is perhaps just a different type of cruelty... oh well. Either way, gentle stuff is my true love. Now that Allison is no longer a Chevalier, I'm happy to (mostly) leave that stuff behind. I'm glad it created an emotional response, though!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed their relationship! That's ultimately what I wanted to write about. I agree, gentle interactions and plot go very well together, since gentle interaction isn't necessarily sexual by nature. As a side note, I spent way too much time debating how to go about the bathroom thing. I ultimately just decided to lampshade it a bit, since I figured it really wasn't that important to the story. It made sense for them to raise the issue, but the specifics seemed unnecessary to explain (and potentially gross). I lampshade it even more in the second story, so at this point I'm committed. Whatever the solution is, it totally absolutely definitely makes perfect sense, trust me!!
I love a nervous/considerate/guilty giantess, too! I think it's super sweet, so I'm glad you enjoyed Allison's thoughts. I also know what you mean, I hated writing the argument chapter. I really don't like writing conflict between them, but sometimes it makes sense for the story. Oh well, like you said it works out in the end. I loved writing the weekend chapters, though. I love comfy cozy relaxing content.
Damn, 16k words for a chapter is nuts! That would definitely make my fingers sore, too. I didn't have a sense for how long my chapters should be, but I don't like to go above 6000 words. No particular reason, it just feels too long for me. However, I usually just write until the scene is done, I've never cut/added stuff to meet a particular word count.
Thank you so much for adding to me for your favorites! I absolutely love that caption, I will gladly accept that description. I'm all about that positivity and supportiveness, so I'm really glad if I was able to provide encouragement.
Thanks again for the review, I really appreciate it. I see that you've already reviewed the second story, so I'll go respond to that one as well! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.
-Pluto
Date: April 01 2021 1:42 PM Title: The Plea
Welcome, and thanks.
Date: March 31 2021 11:34 AM Title: The Plea
No problem. Don't worry about me, you didn't do anything wrong, I appreciate the concern though. I look forward to reading the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2021 11:19 PM Title: The Plea
Fantastic story. I love the Chevalier shrink penalty constuct. Well written and thought out. I would not change a thing. I kept worrying that Brian would notice stains on Allies shoes and start freaking out again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I really appreciate your kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, Allison probably was extra thorough in cleaning her shoes after she brought Brian home. I just started writing the sequel to this story, so I hope you will enjoy it as well!
-Pluto
Date: January 14 2021 8:56 PM Title: The Plea
Holy shit. Where do I even start?
-The Situations-
At every step, it felt like you took the hardest way out. Not only were you avoiding the path of least resistance (praiseworthy in and of itself), you were doing the exact opposite. Chapters 9-10 are probably the best examples; having Cathy show up uninvited, her finding Brian, and then not telling her the truth is a hell of situation to put your characters in. The foreshadowing to set up Allison smuggling Brian out was brilliant, too.
-The Subversion-
You definitely fooled me with that first chapter, but even that served a narrative purpose: setting up a status quo to be broken. It would've been easy to start it off cold like that, and just tell us what the status quo is. But no, you set the tone: you're going to show us. We have to see why Brian's case is special.
All the points about taking the hard way also apply here, since I thought, at every point at the end of Chapter 9, "Okay, there's no way he's gonna go there, right?" but then you went there anyway.
Chapter 11 was a very difficult chapter for me, likely by design. I've read punishment scenes like this before without any issue. It's not my cup of tea, but I can read it. But here, I'm really invested in these characters. It sort of feels like karma to the reader, in a weird way, for so easily accepting the violence characters in other stories experience. It was really interesting to see these common fantasies approached from "the other side", so to speak.
-The Writing-
Perfect grammar and spelling is rare enough. But this? I could do literary analysis to this. The repetition of phrases as a rhetorical device is genuinely reminding me of Slaughterhouse-Five in a way, so that's a good sign. Has the sort of black humor and wit, too. Also, you wrote this in less than a month?? How???
-The Characters-
Allison and Brian are both very well fleshed-out, enough to have me digging into my thighs in Chapter 11 waiting for the session to end. Not only do these details give the characters depth, but they're used for narrative purposes as well. The "Weekend" chapters, character development, and emotional journeys would all be impossible without them. Their interactions are lovely, too. I'm pretty sick of the giant/ess just being awful to the tiny, but Allison and Brian's relationship feels reciprocal and friendly. My heart melted into a puddle whenever they were together.
Wow, this got long. Y'know, I don't normally like writing essays. I guess, in summary, you're going above and beyond, doing all of the stuff real books would do. Please continue to write in the future! This was such a breath of fresh air.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I remember your first review, and I'm really happy that you continued to enjoy the story!!
I really appreciate your kind words, and I'm very glad that you liked the various literary/narrative choices that I made.
I'm happy that you enjoyed how the first chapter served the story! You completely nailed what I was going for.
Yes, Allison and Brian certainly had a pretty rough time throughout the story. I'm glad that you connected with them, even though it had the effect of making some scenes harder to read!
The comparison to Slaughterhouse-Five is a great honor! I definitely tried to use repitition a lot, so I'm glad it came through for you. I may have written this in under a month, but I was either working on or thinking about it pretty much nonstop! It got to the point where I was having pretty strange dreams.
Again, thank you very much for the review! After the response to this story, I'm certainly encouraged to write another one in the future. If I do, I hope you will enjoy it!!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 13 2021 7:24 PM Title: The Plea
Forgot to rate, sorry.
Author's Response:
No worries! Incidentally, your rating got me to 70 reviews! Perhaps a meaningless number, but it still makes me happy. Thanks for the rating!!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 10:23 AM Title: The Plea
Dang I really thought you were gonna go for the cinematic ending there, ya know where He Basejumps into her boobs xD jk jk.
this was a really pleasant read and I will keep an eye out for your name again ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! You never know, maybe something like that happened right after the point where the story ended. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 8:06 PM Title: The Plea
I'm not sure if that's what the last reviewer wanted to say, but now I'm thinking: it would be great to see an ex-chevalier getting the shrinking penalty!
Not that I'd endorse such barbarism, (I do u.u), but the mere thought of this role reversal is thrilling me.
I'm not asking you to ruin this story, but maybe it can be of ispiration for future ones :P
Author's Response:
That would certainly be a way for Chevaliers to gain sympathy for the convicts! Something like that probably won't happen in this story, but there's a lot of potential for stuff like that in future stories. Honestly, if somebody else wanted to write a story in this "Shrink Penalty" universe, I would be totally fine with it.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 3:14 PM Title: The Plea
From Brian I felt the same anxiety I had on the 15 minutes long oral examinations back in school. I know it must have been terrible for him. I can't even imagine what Cathy does to the unlucky prisoners who happen to get in her way on full sessions, or to those poor souls she secretly keeps home;
she seemed rushy, the poor girl couldn't give the things she wanted to do the right amount of time, I was sensing how she was burning inside of eagerness.
I expected the part in wich he couldn't get an erection! It was laughable to see Cathy blush while her twins were hanging out at the man neutral expression, although I hoped he actually had a shy boner and Allie would have realized with disappointment he was lying about his asexuality.
Who knows, maybe he was just too scared to get one; but in any cases, the way he reacted to all the insults about him being a child murderer gives me more and more suspicions. He didn't tell us the whole story.
Anyway, I hope Brian is doing fine the next chapter, though i'm already seeing him rolling back and forward in a corner after experimenting a tad of Cathy's torment LOL, cheers!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! It definitely would have been extremely scary to be in Brian's situation during the session. I'm glad that anxiety came through for you.
Cathy definitely wanted to do more! You're right, it's hard to think about what she does when there are no restrictions.
I'm glad you enjoyed Brian's lack of a "response" to Cathy! I also thought it would be funny. As for Brian's response to the insults, it's definitely suspicious. I'll go into it next time! I hope you enjoy what happens next.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: January 02 2021 6:17 PM Title: The Plea
I was disappointed when I read that this story couldn't last more than 20 chapters! But this means I will enjoy your other stories in the future.
This chapter makes me think even more that Brian is more than what he says about himself. He seems so smart and so good at acting that he could either be a clever psycho or a spy. But I'll take that those are just my speculation and not the writer intentions. He's a good boy I guess :P
Cathy seems instead very naif. She still believes in friendship, and I wasn't surprised when she revealed she had "toys at home" too. Her naivety and cruelty makes her look like those evil cats in the child toons. I find her sexy, but I'm defenetely on Allie's side.
As for Allie, she's in the position where she could be blackmailed by Cathy if only she wanted too, so she shouldn't undervalue her and should let their friendship die very very slowly. I'm wondering what will happen in those 10 minutes session.
If Allie is going to stop Cathy's joy by being too soft with little Brian, so that she doesn't call for more couple playings in the future, or if she's going to comply. And I'm also wondering what kind of torture the mischievious kitty Cathy has in mind.
Anyway, here I'll link the drawing. I pictured the SPAR room to be cold, with a dark shadow and a black corner. My Allie doesn't wear a ponytail, and I probably shouldn't have dressed her with an "electric blue", but I'm not disappointed with the overall outcome. I hope you enjoy too.
Also, the man that should be Brian is tied to a small tiny chair. Something that was not shown in your story. As for the title, initially I thought "They call me Justice" but it cringed me a bit, so I kept your story name instead XD, and I linked your story to the drawing description.
I had another picture in mind, a colourful one, but I'm not sure if I'll do it, I'm a bit stressed this period.
https://www.deviantart.com/bletc/art/An-Innocent-Man-865836502
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm sorry about the length of the story, but it makes me really happy to hear that you enjoy it that much. I hope you enjoy where it goes from here! We still have a good bit left.
Yes, at this point it's probably safe to say that Brian is actually innocent. He is very smart and good at acting, but those are things that happened as a result of his wrongful conviction. With that being said, it doesn't mean that he is being completely honest and real with Allison all the time, though.
Cathy is definitely letting her desire for Brian cloud her judgment a little bit. I love the comparison to cats in old cartoons. There definitely are a few ways this session can go, so I hope you enjoy what happens!
As for your picture, I love it so much!!! You did such an awesome job, thank you so much! The details are fantastic, with the office supplies, document, name tag, and sign in the background. You definitely nailed the cold, metal, and dark vibe of the SPAR. I really like Allison's expression, and I actually really like the addition of the chair. I never imagined that somebody might want to make art based on something I wrote, so thank you again! Don't worry about doing another one if you're stressed, I definitely understand. These are stressful times, take care of yourself first. Regardless, you did an awesome job, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 8:46 PM Title: The Plea
I would rather replace the term cliffhanger with fisthanger at this point. I wanted to see Cathy's expression on a movie, she doesn't seem so dumb to believe Allison kept Brian to torment him and just say "well, you're having fun all for yourself? let's share him", she seems to be more brainwashed and to believe in the importance of SP more than Allie does, well... she enjoys it after all. And Allie just committed something illegal by hiding a criminal like Brian, didn't she?
I'm wondering if she's going to blackmail Allison. In that case, I'm puzzled. How's she going to save her reputation?
Man, tell me this story lasts 30 chapters, 20 at least. XD
Anyway, the 9th chapter gave me a mental picture to draw, and I already had one in mind the previous chapter (they're simple ideas tough). I will do it as soon as I find my mental energies back, I'm leaving my deviantart account here just to let you know what kind of style it would be, 'cause it's not digital
https://www.deviantart.com/bletc
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter.
As for Cathy, I wouldn't say she is necessarily driven by a brainwashed belief in the importance of the SP. That's part of it, but she is also completely addicted to the torture-and-kill element of her job, and she tells herself whatever she wants in order to justify it.
This might be dissapointing, but we're actually ramping up towards the end of the story, here. I can't say exactly how many chapters are left for sure, but I never intended for this story to be super long. I'm not sure if I have a sprawling 20-30 chapter story in me, especially for my first one. Regardless, I hope you enjoy where it goes from here!
As for your deviantart, I absolutely love your style! You're really talented. If you decide to, I would love to see how you envision these characters. I'll be sure to check back from now on!
-Pluto
Date: December 29 2020 5:13 AM Title: The Plea
Wow great story i'm more excited about the relationship between Allison and Brian than fetish content, loving the characters particularly Brian.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I'm glad to hear it. I hope you'll enjoy Brian's development from here!
-Pluto
Date: December 24 2020 9:40 PM Title: The Plea
Don't be surprised I'm leaving many reviews,
it's because I find this story very intriguing and it is giving me a lot of conjectures :)
Maybe I'll be inspired to do some drawings out of these chapters, who knows
Author's Response:
No worries at all, I absolutely love reviews! I'm really glad that you're finding the story so interesting. Please feel free to leave more reviews!
As for some drawings based on these chapters, I would be incredibly honored!! I never would have expected that someone might want to do that when I started writing this story. If you end up doing so, and you feel comfortable sharing it, I would love to see them!
-Pluto
Date: December 24 2020 3:43 PM Title: The Plea
Aside from the interesting points read in the previous reviews, I'm also starting to wonder if it is true that chevaliers do everything in complete anonymity. I know, you've chosen the room to bee without cameras and all to justify the saving of Brian, but I'm not buying the fact that a secret government agency doesn't spy on their employees.
Maybe the person behind the hidden camera has closed one eye.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continued reviews! That's an interesting idea about secret monitoring. It definitely isn't far-fetched. To be fair to myself though, the whole 'no cameras' thing wasn't *just* to make it easier for Allison to help Brian. The point of the Shrink Penalty is for convicts to go through terrible punishment before they are executed. Some Chevaliers probably do some pretty nasty, depraved stuff. It's reasonable to assume that a lot of people wouldn't be willing to do that stuff if they knew they were being watched. Hence, no cameras or witnesses. That doesn't mean the facility isn't watching them secretly, though! I hope you enjoy where it goes from here.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 23 2020 7:56 PM Title: The Plea
Great work! You seem to be falling into the same trap as I, though. Don't write about every little detail! I know, interaction between sb so large and sb so small is per definition extraordinary. But that doesn't mean every little thing has to be written out or we can't help mundane conversations along a little. I'm fighting that same demon and I know how hard it is. But stay strong.
I'm also rather surprised by just how gentle and tutti goody Allie is, given her occupation. I thought she must have been someone who just doesn't think a whole lot most of the time, a person that has a pretty clear picture in her mind of what's right and wrong and then just acts accordingly. That explains why she stomps everyone so quickly, not because she wants to be nice to them. Now it turns out she's actually a bit of a hippie.
I think that closes more doors than it opens, although I'm still dying to know what happens the next time she's called upon to do her duty. She might be forced to "branch out" more often, so as not birth to suspicion. On the other hand, before long she might be stuck with more tiny people she saved, some of whom are probably going to be pretty nasty criminals.
Another sidenote: Is it me or is their society entirely fucked up that they have to execute people every day?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the advice. It is a little difficult for me to know what details you're talking about without specific examples, though.
There definitely is a contradiction between the way Allison is treating Brian and her job as a Chevalier. This is something that will be explored pretty soon, so I hope you find it interesting!
As for the sidenote, it's important to remember that Chevaliers and those who support the Shrink Penalty don't necessarily see the convicts as "people" anymore, due to the severity of their crimes. This assumes that the system is perfect, though, which Allison is learning to be very untrue. I hope you enjoy where the story goes from here!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 22 2020 9:35 PM Title: The Plea
At this point I wonder what would have happened if it was Cathy in chapter 3 instead of Allie. Would have she believed his innocence? If yes, would have she done the same?
But then, I'm not even sure if this man in really innocent. Sure, the way they treated his case is already a proof of innocense, but what if we readers (and Allie) are just being played by his evil mind?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! It's definitely interesting to think about. We know that Cathy is very sadistic towards convicts, and she was really eager to get her hands on Brian. With that in mind, I probably wouldn't have high hopes for Brian should he ever meet Cathy x_x
As for the idea that Brian has actually been lying the whole time, that sure would be an evil twist!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: December 20 2020 9:29 PM Title: The Plea
I've never seen an asexual character in a Giantess story,
and I've never seen LOTR been quoted as well.
Two more points making this story unique and original.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing again! Yes, I thought it would be fun to try adding a different type of character into a shrinking story. I also just wish there were more asexual characters in general. I hope you continue to enjoy this story!
-Pluto
Date: December 18 2020 8:48 PM Title: The Plea
I love it. I especially love Breasts and Foot stuff so please do more. I am interested in where this is going. Great work so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy where it goes from here.
-Pluto