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Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

"Bipeds in general make up most of the sapient species in the cosmos." - Star Trek likes that statement. :D

"I was feeling frisky, but not in the mood to call up any of the few beings around my level of existence. Even I exchanged dalliances now and then."

For all her godhood she still feels satisfied happiness after a good meal. But does she know she's merely a fictitious being thought-up by mortal?

I really liked how fast things excalated at the end. The blonde "goddess" may have been powerless after all (going by the vague hints in the story probably just a mere millions souls strong) but she was important enough to interrupt her playtime at least.

As weird as it may be I feel like this story was actually "valuable" to me. I learned quite a few new words (english isn't my first language after all). Was the usage of more uncommon words something that just happened or was it intentional?



Author's Response:

 

The character does enjoy a nice meal I'd say. Lots of flavors in a super cluster I'm sure.

I'm pleased you enjoyed the story! I'm happy you feel it helped you to learn some new words. For this story, I just used whatever words felt appropriate. I wrote it a few days before submitting it, so my memory might not be perfect on the matter, but I don't recall deliberately using fancier prose or anything.

I'm also pleased you enjoyed the escalation and all that! The blonde "goddess" showing up in the story was in part to help show the disparity of sizes/power that could occur in this universe.

Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Violence, multisize, insane power and massive scales - all of my favorite tropes. Loved this :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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