Date: April 02 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Surprised to see no reviews for this one! I will have to be the first then.
This here is probably my favorite kind of story: it's short and to the point, it features a guy shrunken to micro scale, and it throws him into a casual situation with a disinterested and uncaring girl. It is astonishing to me that this specific set of boxes are so rarely checked in size stories!
Wonderfully written as usual. I love how effectively you stress the casual and indifferent attitude of the girl, to whom this life-changing for little guy (literally) encounter is merely a minor nuisance to be forgotten in a minute.
I know you already have a few stories similar to this one - which I also enjoyed very much - and hope you'll create more!
p.s. to anyone looking for something very similar in format, I recommend reading "Drafty" by Reaperface on this site.
Thank you for a kind review and the reading suggestion. And sorry for getting back to you so late.