Date: July 01 2023 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
When you read this story the one thing that you first notice is this normal man had once had a normal life, his normal life was taken away from him for no reason and he was put into this terrible situation which he could do nothing about.
Also he didn't do anything wrong which means he shouldn't have to be in this situation.
The girl also has no right to kill him when he hasn't done anything to her and in this situation he is even more innocent.
The girl knows that someone else could kill her and this man thats in this situation would only be able to watch her die which he also couldn't help her.
So, she instead should of helped him instead of killing him because of his situation and that she thinks of him no longer human.
Date: April 02 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Surprised to see no reviews for this one! I will have to be the first then.
This here is probably my favorite kind of story: it's short and to the point, it features a guy shrunken to micro scale, and it throws him into a casual situation with a disinterested and uncaring girl. It is astonishing to me that this specific set of boxes are so rarely checked in size stories!
Wonderfully written as usual. I love how effectively you stress the casual and indifferent attitude of the girl, to whom this life-changing for little guy (literally) encounter is merely a minor nuisance to be forgotten in a minute.
I know you already have a few stories similar to this one - which I also enjoyed very much - and hope you'll create more!
p.s. to anyone looking for something very similar in format, I recommend reading "Drafty" by Reaperface on this site.
Author's Response:
Thank you for a kind review and the reading suggestion. And sorry for getting back to you so late.