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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2021 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Restaurant

I just realized I forgot to write a review of the second chapter when I read it.

 

I really enjoyed this chapter. The concept of the restaurant and the idea that she is so naive and self absorbed that she focuses on the supposed fact that her date walked out on her and not even registering the fact that the restaurant went silent or that everyone else is missing and then procedes to consume the rest of her food and drink and then leaves. 

I also enjoyed the addition of the patron that missed the shrink process by being in the bathroom and how he helps himself to the bar and the bartender.

Thanks for continuing your story and I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Let me know if there's any scenarios in this story you'd like to see next! 

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