[Report This]Date: December 01 2020 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lily
ooo I really like Lilly Jenny 2, I feel like she can be a nice, corrupting influence on Jenny, pushing Jen to play with her toy in more intentionally demeaning ways irl~
(I do feel like it would be good just for reading purpouses if she does go back to being called Lilly though, but maybe that's just cause idc much about mindplay or whatever it's called, do what you want of course)
I feel like there were a couple moments you could have gone into more detail on this chapter, last one you said the drive was on her crotch, above her robe, and in this one you said she took the robe off but you didn't really descibe much about her or what that meant. was the computer and the drive on her lap? just the computer? was the drive touching her crotch? what does she look like at that moment? (fingers crossed she has a thick bush <3) etc.
Jenny keeps mentioning other women I wonder if they'll show up in the story eventually?
I really like how this story is coming out!!! love it! can't wait for more!!