Date: February 04 2021 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest
Nice. I suggest having a date, with the date end up going all the way, and steve being forced into a threeway, that ends with him in Aunt Maria's womb. All of it unaware causing him to be stuck in the unaware aAunt Maria longer then with anyone else.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I like the idea of an unaware Aunt Maria carrying him for longer and will see if I can put that in the story.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2021 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 51: Friends not coming over brings you down
I would go with Aunt Maria. it would allow the whole family to be Steve's mothers.
Author's Response:
"thank you for the review. Steve is going with Aunt Maria.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 51: Friends not coming over brings you down
Great set up! I would like to see Kady catch him and Alison help her with the delivery. And maybe that they help each other with the insertion into the next one. Look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. The vote went to Aunt Maria for the person that tiny Steve gets to hangout with. it is possible later on for Kady and Allison to come in again.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2021 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 50: Winter Days
Well i hope Steve spends some time with his Aunt, ae haven't gotten much of her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I will put this down as a vote for Steve going to Aunt Maria.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2021 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 50: Winter Days
I would say to let him stay at home and let his family improve their skills on him. Safer tan the outside world. Maybe with a visit from his other mothers Julia and Alesha of course. Hope to see your next chapter soon!
Author's Response:
Steve is staying with his family. his family with definitly want to have their way with him and his small body. it is possible for Julia and Alesha to find a way in but we have to see how it possibly gets there.
Date: January 27 2021 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Ok, so I have to wonder something. I do get that these women are addicted to his shrinking size and birthing. But I do wonder this, have they noticed his continuous short growth as he keeps getting rebirthed? Is it coming to a point where he might end up dead due to this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and question. The answer is yes, they do notice that he is getting smalller with each rebirth. They all know about his big height being smaller and somewhat his shrunken size. The know that his minimal height is smaller but do not know how much. Alesha has the best knowledge of how small he can get and others rough a rough idea. That might be the case that he dies due to him constantly shrinking, I have multiple endings in store depending on how the story goes. I am currently waiting on more people to vote on the options for the next story arc, so if you have an preference on which direction, vote and see if it wins.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2021 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 49: A Summer Gone
I would go for a holiday with the family. They are more or less addicted to carrying him and be a mother to him and want to explore those feelings more and help each other. Well done so far and I look forward to where you ta Steve in the next story! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. it is possibility this story arc will be chosen. I am holding off on adding to this story so people can review and vote for what story arc they will want. So please be patient. that arc, if chosen by readers, will explore more of those feelings. I am hope you enjoy whatever comes due to the vote.
Date: January 23 2021 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 26: Allison's baby
Why did you make the steve so dumb you made him the biggest fool I hope he's killed you should have made him more human and believable,l like watching cheap porn but when I read Idon't ,it started off pretty good but you made it one of the dumbest stories ive read a disappointment it turned out to be the girl ruined his life and they still turn him on you should have made it at least a tiny bit believable
Author's Response:
Alright, second review, time to let it rip. You must be a real sucker for pain that you complain with one review stating you don’t like it but still read what you don’t like, many people just leave after that. I know this isn’t your cup of tea but man, why still drink what you don’t like. I take criticism and all and realize that I should work on Steve's character to make him more human. I give you that so I will try to make that better. Author for the fun of it trying to get better, that is how you improve, write and see where you make mistakes. The next part of your review makes you the enemy of every writer here. You admit that you literally pay for cheap porn and like it where people sell their bodies out for you to get a little happy, not thinking that people could have been sold into those positions. But when it comes to fantasy and not real people doing it, you demand the highest quality in a place that does it mostly for free and fun. We don’t have time for your bullshit. There are other stories that will probably be more to your fancies, I don’t read every story here but I know everything is not for me and I will not be a jerk about what I don't like. You decided just to sign up and complain about a story you don’t like, I have seen your account and when you signed up. You are a complainer and whiner that is just not happy and wanting to cause problems, you don’t have information on what you like but I know this story isn’t for you.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
It started off pretty good but he became a week willed clod why read it when complaining all the time,who wants to to read about someone like that,you can't rate this you must realy hate Steve
Author's Response:
I read this review and was initially going to respond quickly and angrily at it but decided that it would be better to think over it a few days before a response. It calmed those feelings and made me remember that not everyone likes every story and that is how it is with writing, then you wrote two reviews and that is when it got interesting. I still decide to wait and respond to think and respond accordingly. I will try to be nice for this one. This story is from a previous author that left the story on writing.com as an interactive story so I decided to make additions, the different authors should be noted who wrote it, that is how the premise of the story is. I have rules and stuff for the story additions I make so try to follow it with my own ideas. The main theme of the story is that Steve is losing control of himself and his life as the women in his life try to take advantage of it, get drunk on it, and manipulate him. He thought he was ready but he wasn’t and an accident caused a chain reaction caused somethings to change in his female friend’s desires and lusts. I also take suggestions and reviews and try to put them in the story as best as I can. That is part of the nature of this story and you seemed to have beef with the readers then as they help along with the story, the weak willed is part of how the story plot goes with him having to lose control, else it doesn’t go anywhere, and reviewers asking to make him can’t control his lust around the women in his life, so you have a problem with a lot of readers here.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2021 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 49: A Summer Gone
If I had to chose an option for Steve to experience as a tiny, it would be the last week of college. I like your writing and love to see where you take Steve.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. it is possibility this story arc will be chosen. I am holding off on adding to this story so people can review and vote for what story arc they will want. So please be patient. I try my best to see what the readers want.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 47: Getting an Earful.
She could be the ultimate mother to him by carrying him for a longer period than the others and be the first one to breastfeed him. She has seen the others after all and that would be the ultimate way to overpower them
Author's Response:
I like the idea but I already have something planned for Steve to finish this arc. I do have to say though that Allison has been the first one to breastfeed him, she did it when she gave birth to Steve. Alesha has bigger boobs than everyone else so she has that going for her, they could become larger due to breastmilk.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2021 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Not your strongest chapter if you ask me but that is only because this is not really my thing. I am curious how Alesha is going to enjoy him and become his next mother. I really look forward to see how you let things unfold.
Author's Response:
I know not every chapter will please everyone but I try to complete the requests people give me in the reviews. Someone asked for an ear chapter so I try to find a way to get an ear scene. I try to please many different readers whe want to read different things. Sorry if this feels like a rant, I want a lot readers to give reviews and ideas for the story and I want them to know that I try to make what they want possible within reason.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 46: A really affectionate friend
Your writing skills seem to improve every chapter. Therefore I definitely would like to see how you let things develop before the inevitable happens. Well done and I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am trying to improve my writing by writing a lot of stuff and seeing where I need to get better. I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: January 16 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I was thinking maybe you could write a chapter where alesha's mum and dad do the dirty but are unaware that Steve is there?? Love your work by the way
Author's Response:
I love the idea and want to implement into the story. unfortunately, this arc of the story is about to end with Steve going in Alesha's womb. I have other arcs coming up which I want readers to chose from. Some would make it easier Alesha's mum and dad to do the dirty being unaware of Steve while others would make it easier for other characters to have an interaction like that. I like to do it but I have to see where the story goes.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2021 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles
It might be nice let Steve take the initiative to enter her. After all it is pretty chilling outside the spot he is growing to feel comfortable in. That will be stimulating surprise for Alesha not having to force him in.
Author's Response:
I might go with that or might not. I could also use it later on. I don't think that Steve wants that right now. He has been trying to escape the past 48 hours from the girls and it seems to be out of place if out of blue he wants to be inside. I will try my best to see if I can come up with him wanting to go in but I give no promises.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles
... need you to go right inside MY womb because I suffered enough from seeing my mother enjoy carrying you!
Yet another terrific and descriptive chapter! Well done!
Author's Response:
I will go with that for what Alesha says. Thank you for enjoying the chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 42: I don't like Needles
Really love the way you describe Julia's feelings and urges with Steve inside of her. Look forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response and enjoyment of the story
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Stories been great, I loved the nose chapter. Any chance we can get an ear chapter later on and/ or maybe an anal chapter
Author's Response:
I will try to get an ear and/or anal chapter in as best as I can. Thank you for enjoying the story.
Date: January 02 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 41: An unexpected child
I would like to see Alesha get Steve sometime soon. She has been waiting a long time for him. Alesha would be more of a torment for him being the one who shrunk him to this size.
Author's Response:
Alesha will get her chance with Steve soon, Julia just wants a little bit more time wth him.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2021 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 41: An unexpected child
Julia will try to keep him inside for as long as possible to sexually enjoy her pregnancy of a teenage boy! Again a great chapter!
Author's Response:
Julia is going to try and keep him inside her as long as possible. She is enjoying this.