Date: February 15 2021 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Nice chapter!
It's great to know both of them want a kid and Steve could grant this wish for them~
And about for the next chapter I believe Kirk could go straight for the pussy, but instead of Steve ending up direct to Kara's womb after being cum out, he actually end up just in the vagina and then Kara find him, wonder how a tiny man ended up in there and before Steve can say something to her or get some help from her she just decided to ignore him and use Steve for her own pleasure and just then this can lead to two different routes for Steve.
One is that he finally grow back to normal size after Kara had her fun and return to his home.
And the other would be a sort of "alternative ending" where Kara shove Steve back in her vagina wanting him all the way in her womb, and with the help of Kirk that's still unaware about Steve, they both have sex again and Steve is pushed by Kirk and finally end up into Kara's womb, and with that Steve is "reborn" and are now their son.
But that "alternative ending" is just a wish of mine.
Another choice that I would choose that could be interest in my perspective would be Kirk cumming Steve out while using Kara's boobs to masturbate and then instead of Kara finding Steve first, it would be Kirk that would found him, he would excuse himself to go to the bathroom to interrogate the tiny man and after hearing that he's Maria's nephew he would be scared that Steve could end up telling his wife about Maria and with that Kirk would try to silence Steve by putting him inside his wife vagina without her knowing and fuck her hard hoping that it would silence the little Steve, but in the end Steve is just roughly shoved into Kara's womb by Kirk dick.
But that's also another wish of mine. I'm sure next chapter will be great~
Author's Response:
Thank your for all those great suggestions. I like them a lot nad hope that I could use one of them as a start if readers want that. I am right now giving readers the option to see if one of the couples find him before he goes in the womb. you will probably see Kara use Steve for her own pleasure if she finds him and Kirk will try to silence the little guy. I went with oral sex for the first part and led to boobs for another reader which allows Steve to be noticed by one of the two.
Date: February 14 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 58: Time to start again from the top
Nice. I hope Kirk starts off straight to the pussy. Not only does it make it so that Steve is shot inside, and hopefully all the way to the womb in one shot, but they are specifically trying for a child, and have been on the fritz lately. Plus the other routes dont end with ateve in the womb, but elsewhere.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I went with oral first and then boobs. I said to another person that I would try to do an oral scene. but don't worry, Steve will eventually go inside a womb.
Date: February 13 2021 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 57: A love renewed
I was thinking about this. The women always keep wanting him small regardless of how he feels. My understanding is that he shrinks when horny and they assume he's ok with it but can't admit his likes to their treatment. That's obvious to the story itself. I am curious about this though, what if in a different case. It's gentics that affects both men and women. I could see a change of perspective where Steve's family find themselves with the same condition but He takes advantage by using them for once. It's a sexy bit of karma and Steve could get a small break.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes, Steve shrinks everytime he is horny and aroused. some of the situations was assuming that he was okay with it and other times it was done because they desire to have a tiny human and that it leads to him being stuck in their womb. Each women brings something different to the table. Kady brings motherly love, Allison is more about controlling him, Alesha sees him more as a toy, Julia was accidental love. Mrs. Adam is going to bring something else to the table. I find the changed perspective interesting but I can not do it. the original auther has rules and one of the rules clearly states that only Steve can shrink or change sizes. He is unique. I will probably come up with a reason later on as to why he is the only one.
Date: February 12 2021 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 57: A love renewed
Amazing!
And of course the date will go well, Kirk will be able to fix his relationship to Kara, Steve will be shoot out of Kirk's balls and into Kara womb and Kara will have a little man for a while "before he grow back to normal" to use to please her when she want to use him alone or when she and her unaware husband decide to have sex using him for extra pleasure~
It's a win win~ "Maybe not for Steve, but oh well, life is unfair~"
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Kirk will fix his relationship with his wife and they will get it on. I like the idea of Kara finding Steve and playing with him for a little bit before shoving him inside her womb. I have to see if others will like that as well since you brought the idea up.
Date: February 11 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Love this chapter, also loved the little itch that Kirk felt before going to sleep at the end, not even aware that he's hosting Aunt Maria little nephew in there, wich also shows that Steve attempts of getting attention or trying to get out of there on is own are in vain and are just a little itch for Kirk to scrach and forget for a while.
I would suggest that Kirk shoot his load into his wife womb, But before that, Steve could be stuck in Kirk's balls longer, just to build up the story a little longer, for Kirk to solve the problem he and his wife had, maybe go out on a date with her first and then they would have sex.
And while that happen, Steve is swimming around inside Kirk balls trying to find a way to get out, but just like I said it's all in vain and he stay in there until he finally is shoot out and into Kirk's wife womb, and with that making them both technically the new "parents" of Steve.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Steve will be stuck in Kirk for a little bit so that Kirk and his wife can probably fix things. Kirk will be annoyed by the itch during his time leading up to the moment. Will have to wait and see how Steve gets out of this.
Date: February 11 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Good chapter. Hope it is Mrs. Adams, especially if she is off because she is pregnant without knowing, messing up her hormones and Steve ends up inside their unborn child for years(until the child has sex as well that is) I've seen interactive stories where that happened before and found it interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It is definitly Mrs. Adams from the interactive story. Steve will mess up her hormones a bit but I do not think he will be stuck inside her unborn child, it wouldn't fit well with the original author's rules. I can have him influence the pregnancy.
Date: February 10 2021 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!
I think Steve going through this mans dick to his balls stuck in there unaware for a while, this man has a wife and evenly shot into his wife one night and sucked into her womb..
Author's Response:
Thank your for the review. Steve is stuck inside the man's balls right now and everyone is unaware of it right now. Steve will either get shot in the man's wife womb or be shot into another woman if he tries the website again.
Date: February 10 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!
I would go with a guy that hasn't been seen in the story yet. it would make it more interesting to see how Steve will get back from a situation where the guy shoots Steve into someone else.
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I went with a guy that no one knows about allowing Steve to be shot into someone else.
Date: February 10 2021 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!
What a excellent chapter, and my choice would totally be for the mysterious man to end his date with the Aunt early to carry Steve for now and shoot him out in a difference women that will also be unaware about him.
And who knows, maybe this man is already married and will shoot Steve out into his wife womb.
Either way it'll be an amazing chapter that's for sure~
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I did have them end the date early causing poor Steve to be stuck in the man's cock. everyone is unaware of the tiny Steve right now. it is now time for Steve to go in his wife or someone else.
Date: February 09 2021 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!
If the different target is a total stranger that doesn't even know Steve exists then I vote that, otherwise I vote in his aunt's womb. Both completely unaware.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am goin with the man taking Steve somewhere else, the man has the option of putting Steve in his wife or another stranger right now.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!
Oral, that way we could potentially get some vore.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Sorry that I didn't get to oral with this chapter. I will try to get some oral action with Steve soon.
Date: February 09 2021 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game
And about the Man identity, I actually don't know, maybe he could be a new character, a matured daddy man that no one ever heard about before.
Also about what I said of Steven being stuck on this man dick being a new experience for him, what I wanted to mean is that maybe in the future when he does go back to his family again this kind of thing can happen again to him, like ending up in one of the womens vagina or assholes while a normal size dude fucks them and Steven presence being unaware by the giant man, at this point he would need to accept the situation he would be on for now on, he would be an addition/extra for the womens pleasure while having sex with some normal sized mans, I just imagined a scenario where Julia's husband comes back home while Julia have little Steve inside her vagina and then both goes and have sex while her husband is unaware about little Steven in there being pushed in and out by his cock and then he cums and Steve is washed away on his cum and into her womb he goes again.
Can't wait to see next chapter~ this story is really good~
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I believe I am going with a new character that hasn't been seen yet in this story. I still giving people time to decide if they want a new character or use an old male character in the story. The two other male characters that have been introduced in the sotry are Garrett and Julia's husband those are the two I am working with. if it is a new character, I will take the mature daddy into consideration. I do like the part of the woman being totally aware of a tiny Steve in her asshole or vagina with an unaware male having sex with one of the women.
Date: February 08 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game
I would vote for Steve being stuck on the penis of the Man for now.
It can be a new experience that Steve will have to deal with when the date is over, he will be stuck on this unknow man penis for some time while being 100% unaware by him. And maybe this dude will have a date with another women that then Steve will be shoot out from the dude dick and into this other unknow women womb.
Not sure if this drug that was used on him is different since he shrunken even smaler than before and If it's different maybe he will be that small for a long time than before.
Can't wait to see more~
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Steve is stuck inside the man's dick right now. it is possible for him to be stuck there for a while. right now we are deciding if the man shoots Steve into Aunt Maria or holds off for someone else.
The drug is keeping him small and it will keep him small for a long time. the drug is not having the effect of making him smaller than before. Everytime he goes in a women's womb, Steve is able to shrink farther than he has before.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2021 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game
Let's have Steve stuck in the anus this time!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Steve got to spend some time in the anus but people wanted him to go in the man's cock. it is possible for this man to shoot Steve in another girl's anus
Date: February 08 2021 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game
Nice. Time for unaware threesome. I vote for falling inside the cock, and either being placed in an unaware Aunt Maria's womb later on, or since you said possible to add a new person, you could have Steve stay inside the cock until the guy gets it on with a different girl, that is a complete stranger a few days later if the date turned out bad. That would both add a new person, and provide a way for Steve to be elsewhere with no clue how to get back home, especially if the girl is from a different city entirely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking the chapter. Steve has fallen inside the man's cock and is ready to be delivered to somewhere on a woman. I like the idea of him being used in a different girl later on and no one knows about it for awhile. We will see where this goes
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Since she's being secretive, maybe she's seeing one of his friends? Also, is Aunt Maria less mischievous than in your previous stories? This one doesn't seem interested in voring her nephew.
Author's Response:
That is the idea, I plan for the person to be someone who has already been in the story to be the date she is seeing. the person she is seeing is probably someone who should be having a rendezvous with her.
As for Aunt Maria's personality, the orginal author has this as interactive story that he wrote some of the chapters to start out the story and created many different scenarios. I picked one option and decided to extend the story. Most of these additions have been done by me, thegreatrizzo. I have read over the many options he has written and that is where you get a story where Aunt Maria vores Steve. I am trying to include that information in the story as part of it was a flashback. I would say that Aunt Maria would still try to vore him if she got the chance but Steve's guard was up and so she didn't try at all because it would be hard to get him worked up with out fleeing. I was going to explore that option more if people chose thanksgiving as the next arc in my previous voting section for direction of the story.
Right now, Steve is caught unware by two people doing the act but it could lead to something like the other story if readers review and ask to go that direction.
Date: February 05 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 53: A Stinky Drive to a Date
Nice chapter!
also I'm really glad to know that the Aunt and her date will be completely unaware about little Steve and that he'll probably be part of their "ball game".
Can't wait to see the next chapter~
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The two of them are going to be unware of the little watcher of their "ball game" and will join in. I am glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2021 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest
I liked the date option , I wonder who is gonna be the Aunt date be, if it'll be a man or a woman, if it's a woman that's super fine by me~
but if it's a man it can be interesting too, like when both start doing some sex shenanigans at some point Steve ends up inside his Aunt womb and then when he grow back a little the Aunt and her Lover will think that she's pregnant without knowing that it's Steve in there.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Aunt Maria on a date is where this is going to go. The date is going to be a man. The original auther has rules of what I can do with the characters, I can have some of that content but it can't be a major point of an interaction. I can tell you that some stuff is going to happen to Steve while others are unaware of him being there.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2021 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest
How could I forget about aunt Maria! A movie with the family seems to me the perfect setting to do whatever the others already experienced. Steve already has the right size.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. i am glad that you are happy that Aunt Maria is having sometime with Steve. I hope you still enjoy the story as it goes on.
Date: February 04 2021 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest
Oh yes! Some great ass stuff in here. Sounds like Aunt Maria likes to be stinky I hope our little guy gets to experience some of that gas as he continues to shrink!
Author's Response:
Thank your for the review. I put a little gas in the next chapter as Aunt Maria heads to her date. Steve is at his minimal height right now at 1/8 of an inch. He was some conditions to make him shrink even farther.