[Report This]Date: December 22 2020 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 40: Cracking In
Great chapter! Steve is back inside a womb. I expect Alesha not to be to happy about Steve being in her mother. She wanted Steve to be inside her and would try to get him out. Making Steve have even more mommies.
Author's Response:
I do believe that Alesha was trying to get Steve in her womb. I will try to get the confontation between the mother and daughter about what to do with Steve.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2020 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 39: Mother Nose Best
Good chapter although the nose part is not really what I like. A hole would be a forced one way street to the grand prize, the womb. From Julia's point of view that is.
Author's Response:
A reader asked for a nose scene so I tried to find a spot to fit it in. I try my best to have reader's responses become part of the story.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2020 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 38: Mother Daughter Time
Terrific build up! Is she going to confess Steve? That would give Julia a perfect opportunity to show her daughter some other possibilities to enjoy Steve and prepare her for pregnancy. I really look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Julia confesses something to Steve, Julia doesn't know much about small humans but she knows that they fit perfectly somewhere.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 37: Family time
That would be the mother of course! Anxious to have her way with Steve and cannot wait to give birth to a son, a baby brother for Alesha. And definitely turned on while carrying him ;}
Author's Response:
The Mother is on the scene. who will carry Steve?
Date: December 10 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 34: A Hot Mess
I think that Alesha will stick Steve on her boobs, until everyone gives up looking for him. I can also imagine Steve being used as a replacement for one of the heart-shaped pasties on Alesha's swimsuit.
Author's Response:
They could not find Steve because Alesha hid him in her heart-shaped pasties. She was some weapons with her boobs against him.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I love your writing, and was hoping we might be able to get a nose chapter from you?
Author's Response:
I will try to get a nose scene into the story
Date: December 08 2020 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling
I suggest warm, and unaware in the mouth of either one of the other two(especially Alesha), or someone new, especially if they unaware swallow him, and don't find out until later after everyone goes home. Leaving him all alone with them.
Author's Response:
Steve has landed on something warm and part of it is unaware. We just have to wait and see if the other women find out that Alesha has him.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling
Great Chapter! I would go with warm.
Author's Response:
Warm it is
Date: December 04 2020 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 32: The summer melons
I vote noodle
Author's Response:
Noodle it is
Date: December 01 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I suspect that the answer will be ALL OF THE ABOVE, because who cares what a human doll thinks. They should try all their ideas on Steve and drag it out as long as possible. Eventually, once Steve gets down to his minimum size, he should become the trophy for the overall winner who gets to keep him for a few more days. I would put my money on Alesha.
Author's Response:
There will be a lot of action with Steve. They will mess with him hard as they start to think of him more and more as a human doll. Steve will get shrunk down to his minimum size and be given to the winner.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 30: I didn't go the pool to stare at butts
Well done, greatrizzo! I'm following this story with great interest.
I just wish the chapters were longer.
Author's Response:
Thank you for following this story. The chapters are meant to be somewhat brief so people can review and help decide where it should go. The chapters will get longer as Steve gets smaller and be used by the girls.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 29: The REAL Pool Party Begins!
Great chapter! Can't wait for interaction between the ladies. Steve being vaginally inserted as a mutual sex toy!
Author's Response:
There will some good interactions with the ladies as they start to treat him like a toy
[Report This]Date: November 23 2020 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 27: Home Alone
I love this story. One of the very few ones (if not the only one..?) with 'serial unbirth'. So many moms!!! <3 Well, two for now, but who knows if there might be more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I hoped you caught that Steve is continually getting smaller after every unbirth. I hope you continue reading and enjoying the story
Date: November 18 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 24: An Assload of Problems
Nice story. Pity about the restrictions, but that's okay. Is it bad that I hope that Steve gets stuck in Garrets private, and Allison leaves while thinking he is in her when he is not? Then that Steve has to wait, only for Alesha(found name on writing . Com) gets Garret to help her practice, and Steve gets trapped in an unaware Alesha? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
it is an idea for him to get stuck there, I might use it in the future. Right now it is Allison's turn to have fun with Steve. I do plan on an interaction to happen with Alesha. I might see about it being unaware or totally aware. These girls do have the hots for a shrunken man
Date: November 17 2020 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I vote for the toys. It gives Allision and Aunt Maria the chance to gang up and work together to humiliate Steve. Also, what about a day in the backyard pool with Steve being used and abused by all the giantesses. Finally, I hope to see more breast and nipple domination of Steve in the future.
Author's Response:
The toys will be done in the future. I will see about having Aunt Maria and Allison gang up on him. I like the idea of a backyard pool with all the giantess. I don't think he would be able to control his shrinking there. I will see about doing more breast and nipple domination as well. Keep enjoying the story
Date: November 17 2020 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 23: After Credits Scene
Nice. I vote head to Garret, especially if Steve either ends up back in Allison's Womb(especially if there is a side effect that changes him into girl this time, or unaware cock vored by Garret, only to be delivered to someone else later on through sex with neither knowing(meaning complete unaware.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review. Steve is heading over to Garrett's house. I would like to see about transforming him into a girl but the original author was against that sort of thing. The original story is on writing.com, the author sm7in has a link in his bio where you can create a seperate path for it. You will see that Garrett is unaware of what is going on.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2020 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 23: After Credits Scene
Great story. I choose going to Garrett's house because Allison will be able to mess with Steve a whole lot with his best friend. I will also go with that Steve can't really control himself. I hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. Steve will be having problems controlling himself in the future.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2020 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: After Credits Scene
Amazing story. I think she should go with the sex toys. I think more description is always better. I like the idea of Steve losing control over himself and being teased/tested more and more for it. I hope you carry this on for a long time.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I will definitly have Steve be used with sex toys in the future. I will see about Steve losing control of himself. I will try to make it go the long haul.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 21: Movie problems
The hard way - anal.
Good story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. The ass it is.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2020 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 19: Attached and Desired
So now Alison is going to enjoy and carry him? He won't be cured for a long time! Great chapters! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your response. we just have to wait and see.