Date: February 15 2021 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Nice chapter!
It's great to know both of them want a kid and Steve could grant this wish for them~
And about for the next chapter I believe Kirk could go straight for the pussy, but instead of Steve ending up direct to Kara's womb after being cum out, he actually end up just in the vagina and then Kara find him, wonder how a tiny man ended up in there and before Steve can say something to her or get some help from her she just decided to ignore him and use Steve for her own pleasure and just then this can lead to two different routes for Steve.
One is that he finally grow back to normal size after Kara had her fun and return to his home.
And the other would be a sort of "alternative ending" where Kara shove Steve back in her vagina wanting him all the way in her womb, and with the help of Kirk that's still unaware about Steve, they both have sex again and Steve is pushed by Kirk and finally end up into Kara's womb, and with that Steve is "reborn" and are now their son.
But that "alternative ending" is just a wish of mine.
Another choice that I would choose that could be interest in my perspective would be Kirk cumming Steve out while using Kara's boobs to masturbate and then instead of Kara finding Steve first, it would be Kirk that would found him, he would excuse himself to go to the bathroom to interrogate the tiny man and after hearing that he's Maria's nephew he would be scared that Steve could end up telling his wife about Maria and with that Kirk would try to silence Steve by putting him inside his wife vagina without her knowing and fuck her hard hoping that it would silence the little Steve, but in the end Steve is just roughly shoved into Kara's womb by Kirk dick.
But that's also another wish of mine. I'm sure next chapter will be great~
Author's Response:
Thank your for all those great suggestions. I like them a lot nad hope that I could use one of them as a start if readers want that. I am right now giving readers the option to see if one of the couples find him before he goes in the womb. you will probably see Kara use Steve for her own pleasure if she finds him and Kirk will try to silence the little guy. I went with oral sex for the first part and led to boobs for another reader which allows Steve to be noticed by one of the two.
Date: February 11 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Love this chapter, also loved the little itch that Kirk felt before going to sleep at the end, not even aware that he's hosting Aunt Maria little nephew in there, wich also shows that Steve attempts of getting attention or trying to get out of there on is own are in vain and are just a little itch for Kirk to scrach and forget for a while.
I would suggest that Kirk shoot his load into his wife womb, But before that, Steve could be stuck in Kirk's balls longer, just to build up the story a little longer, for Kirk to solve the problem he and his wife had, maybe go out on a date with her first and then they would have sex.
And while that happen, Steve is swimming around inside Kirk balls trying to find a way to get out, but just like I said it's all in vain and he stay in there until he finally is shoot out and into Kirk's wife womb, and with that making them both technically the new "parents" of Steve.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Steve will be stuck in Kirk for a little bit so that Kirk and his wife can probably fix things. Kirk will be annoyed by the itch during his time leading up to the moment. Will have to wait and see how Steve gets out of this.
Date: February 11 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost
Good chapter. Hope it is Mrs. Adams, especially if she is off because she is pregnant without knowing, messing up her hormones and Steve ends up inside their unborn child for years(until the child has sex as well that is) I've seen interactive stories where that happened before and found it interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It is definitly Mrs. Adams from the interactive story. Steve will mess up her hormones a bit but I do not think he will be stuck inside her unborn child, it wouldn't fit well with the original author's rules. I can have him influence the pregnancy.