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Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2021 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

I think Steve going through this mans dick to his balls stuck in there unaware for a while, this man has a wife and evenly shot into his wife one night and sucked into her womb.. 



Author's Response:

Thank your for the review. Steve is stuck inside the man's balls right now and everyone is unaware of it right now. Steve will either get shot in the man's wife womb or be shot into another woman if he tries the website again.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

I would go with a guy that hasn't been seen in the story yet. it would make it more interesting to see how Steve will get back from a situation where the guy shoots Steve into someone else.

 

Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I went with a guy that no one knows about allowing Steve to be shot into someone else.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2021 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

What a excellent chapter, and my choice would totally be for the mysterious man to end his date with the Aunt early to carry Steve for now and shoot him out in a difference women that will also be unaware about him.

And who knows, maybe this man is already married and will shoot Steve out into his wife womb.

Either way it'll be an amazing chapter that's for sure~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I did have them end the date early causing poor Steve to be stuck in the man's cock. everyone is unaware of the tiny Steve right now. it is now time for Steve to go in his wife or someone else.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2021 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

If the different target is a total stranger that doesn't even know Steve exists then I vote that,  otherwise I vote in his aunt's womb. Both completely unaware.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am goin with the man taking Steve somewhere else, the man has the option of putting Steve in his wife or another stranger right now.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

Oral, that way we could potentially get some vore. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Sorry that I didn't get to oral with this chapter. I will try to get some oral action with Steve soon.

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