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Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles

It might be nice let Steve take the initiative to enter her. After all it is pretty chilling outside the spot he is growing to feel comfortable in. That will be stimulating surprise for Alesha not having to force him in.



Author's Response:

I might go with that or might not. I could also use it later on. I don't think that Steve wants that right now. He has been trying to escape the past 48 hours from the girls and it seems to be out of place if out of blue he wants to be inside. I will try my best to see if I can come up with him wanting to go in but I give no promises.

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles

... need you to go right inside MY womb because I suffered enough from seeing my mother enjoy carrying you!

Yet another terrific and descriptive chapter! Well done!



Author's Response:

I will go with that for what Alesha says. Thank you for enjoying the chapter.

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