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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2020 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling

I suggest warm, and unaware in the mouth of either one of the other two(especially Alesha), or someone new, especially if they unaware swallow him, and don't find out until later after everyone goes home. Leaving him all alone with them.



Author's Response:

Steve has landed on something warm and part of it is unaware. We just have to wait and see if the other women find out that Alesha has him.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2020 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling

Great Chapter! I would go with warm.



Author's Response:

Warm it is

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