Alright, second review, time to let it rip. You must be a real sucker for pain that you complain with one review stating you don’t like it but still read what you don’t like, many people just leave after that. I know this isn’t your cup of tea but man, why still drink what you don’t like. I take criticism and all and realize that I should work on Steve's character to make him more human. I give you that so I will try to make that better. Author for the fun of it trying to get better, that is how you improve, write and see where you make mistakes. The next part of your review makes you the enemy of every writer here. You admit that you literally pay for cheap porn and like it where people sell their bodies out for you to get a little happy, not thinking that people could have been sold into those positions. But when it comes to fantasy and not real people doing it, you demand the highest quality in a place that does it mostly for free and fun. We don’t have time for your bullshit. There are other stories that will probably be more to your fancies, I don’t read every story here but I know everything is not for me and I will not be a jerk about what I don't like. You decided just to sign up and complain about a story you don’t like, I have seen your account and when you signed up. You are a complainer and whiner that is just not happy and wanting to cause problems, you don’t have information on what you like but I know this story isn’t for you.