Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 24: An Assload of Problems

Nice story. Pity about the restrictions, but that's okay. Is it bad that I hope that Steve gets stuck in Garrets private, and Allison leaves while thinking he is in her when he is not? Then that Steve has to wait, only for Alesha(found name on writing . Com) gets Garret to help her practice, and Steve gets trapped in an unaware Alesha? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

it is an idea for him to get stuck there, I might use it in the future. Right now it is Allison's turn to have fun with Steve. I do plan on an interaction to happen with Alesha. I might see about it being unaware or totally aware. These girls do have the hots for a shrunken man