Date: June 24 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
kady!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I will count this as a vote for Kady
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Since she's being secretive, maybe she's seeing one of his friends? Also, is Aunt Maria less mischievous than in your previous stories? This one doesn't seem interested in voring her nephew.
Author's Response:
That is the idea, I plan for the person to be someone who has already been in the story to be the date she is seeing. the person she is seeing is probably someone who should be having a rendezvous with her.
As for Aunt Maria's personality, the orginal author has this as interactive story that he wrote some of the chapters to start out the story and created many different scenarios. I picked one option and decided to extend the story. Most of these additions have been done by me, thegreatrizzo. I have read over the many options he has written and that is where you get a story where Aunt Maria vores Steve. I am trying to include that information in the story as part of it was a flashback. I would say that Aunt Maria would still try to vore him if she got the chance but Steve's guard was up and so she didn't try at all because it would be hard to get him worked up with out fleeing. I was going to explore that option more if people chose thanksgiving as the next arc in my previous voting section for direction of the story.
Right now, Steve is caught unware by two people doing the act but it could lead to something like the other story if readers review and ask to go that direction.
Date: January 27 2021 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Ok, so I have to wonder something. I do get that these women are addicted to his shrinking size and birthing. But I do wonder this, have they noticed his continuous short growth as he keeps getting rebirthed? Is it coming to a point where he might end up dead due to this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and question. The answer is yes, they do notice that he is getting smalller with each rebirth. They all know about his big height being smaller and somewhat his shrunken size. The know that his minimal height is smaller but do not know how much. Alesha has the best knowledge of how small he can get and others rough a rough idea. That might be the case that he dies due to him constantly shrinking, I have multiple endings in store depending on how the story goes. I am currently waiting on more people to vote on the options for the next story arc, so if you have an preference on which direction, vote and see if it wins.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
It started off pretty good but he became a week willed clod why read it when complaining all the time,who wants to to read about someone like that,you can't rate this you must realy hate Steve
Author's Response:
I read this review and was initially going to respond quickly and angrily at it but decided that it would be better to think over it a few days before a response. It calmed those feelings and made me remember that not everyone likes every story and that is how it is with writing, then you wrote two reviews and that is when it got interesting. I still decide to wait and respond to think and respond accordingly. I will try to be nice for this one. This story is from a previous author that left the story on writing.com as an interactive story so I decided to make additions, the different authors should be noted who wrote it, that is how the premise of the story is. I have rules and stuff for the story additions I make so try to follow it with my own ideas. The main theme of the story is that Steve is losing control of himself and his life as the women in his life try to take advantage of it, get drunk on it, and manipulate him. He thought he was ready but he wasn’t and an accident caused a chain reaction caused somethings to change in his female friend’s desires and lusts. I also take suggestions and reviews and try to put them in the story as best as I can. That is part of the nature of this story and you seemed to have beef with the readers then as they help along with the story, the weak willed is part of how the story plot goes with him having to lose control, else it doesn’t go anywhere, and reviewers asking to make him can’t control his lust around the women in his life, so you have a problem with a lot of readers here.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2021 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Not your strongest chapter if you ask me but that is only because this is not really my thing. I am curious how Alesha is going to enjoy him and become his next mother. I really look forward to see how you let things unfold.
Author's Response:
I know not every chapter will please everyone but I try to complete the requests people give me in the reviews. Someone asked for an ear chapter so I try to find a way to get an ear scene. I try to please many different readers whe want to read different things. Sorry if this feels like a rant, I want a lot readers to give reviews and ideas for the story and I want them to know that I try to make what they want possible within reason.
Date: January 16 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I was thinking maybe you could write a chapter where alesha's mum and dad do the dirty but are unaware that Steve is there?? Love your work by the way
Author's Response:
I love the idea and want to implement into the story. unfortunately, this arc of the story is about to end with Steve going in Alesha's womb. I have other arcs coming up which I want readers to chose from. Some would make it easier Alesha's mum and dad to do the dirty being unaware of Steve while others would make it easier for other characters to have an interaction like that. I like to do it but I have to see where the story goes.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
Stories been great, I loved the nose chapter. Any chance we can get an ear chapter later on and/ or maybe an anal chapter
Author's Response:
I will try to get an ear and/or anal chapter in as best as I can. Thank you for enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I love your writing, and was hoping we might be able to get a nose chapter from you?
Author's Response:
I will try to get a nose scene into the story
Date: December 01 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I suspect that the answer will be ALL OF THE ABOVE, because who cares what a human doll thinks. They should try all their ideas on Steve and drag it out as long as possible. Eventually, once Steve gets down to his minimum size, he should become the trophy for the overall winner who gets to keep him for a few more days. I would put my money on Alesha.
Author's Response:
There will be a lot of action with Steve. They will mess with him hard as they start to think of him more and more as a human doll. Steve will get shrunk down to his minimum size and be given to the winner.
Date: November 17 2020 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prolgue
I vote for the toys. It gives Allision and Aunt Maria the chance to gang up and work together to humiliate Steve. Also, what about a day in the backyard pool with Steve being used and abused by all the giantesses. Finally, I hope to see more breast and nipple domination of Steve in the future.
Author's Response:
The toys will be done in the future. I will see about having Aunt Maria and Allison gang up on him. I like the idea of a backyard pool with all the giantess. I don't think he would be able to control his shrinking there. I will see about doing more breast and nipple domination as well. Keep enjoying the story