Date: November 10 2020 9:08 PM Title: Cherry Pie
As you surely know, there's death, taxes, and me asking how it's going with the admins - is the original officially lost or did you just feel inspired?
Anyway, I confess my ignorance about panties - how does one tell if they do or no not have that particular capability?
Author's Response:
Oh it's easy. Take the elastic, sew three little hoops into them on the inside for two hands and the feet. Essentialy, the shrinkee becomes the panty, while the elastic keeps him bound ;)
Date: November 10 2020 5:23 AM Title: Cherry Pie
Really well written and rather brutal. I think you should emphasize scale more. Thought it would start off with him being her toering.
Please carry on, both your writing and the characters have depth.
Personal wish list is more micro and foot action
Author's Response:
I'm happy you enjoy it! I'll be sure to keep more micro action in mind for the future. Trust me, I'd write sonnets about feet if I didn't fear the reader's boredem lol. I try to spice it up with variety.