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Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 02 2020 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - You want to hear a crazy story?

This story has potential to be my favorites in recent memory. I love the dynamic the captor and the captive have. The obbsession Yuna has for Jessica, with it being a sort of 'if I can't have you, no one will' thing. I'm beyond excited for Jessica to live out her fantasy, even if it means she won't live to see the next day. Super looking forward for more!

 

Reviewer: Hershrunkenplaything Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - You want to hear a crazy story?

A promising start for sure. I'm enjoying your style of writing and storytelling so far. Excited to see where this goes

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - You want to hear a crazy story?

Looking forward to reading more - off to a great start and the plot is intriguing!

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