Date: October 17 2020 8:32 PM Title: Taking a Dip
You're back! It's great to have another story from you. I'm trying to think what it is that is so remarkable about your stories. I think it's that your stories are lewd but also romantic and whimsical. The romance plays up the submission and connection that sits below the outward expression of the fetish. It's a neat interplay. I also like how you played with folklore - in a way that provided enough context without being over the top with exposition. Really well done.
You're feedback is much appreciated! I was worried the intro was a litle too long, but I hate piling into the fetish scenes too fast. It seems though it paid off :D You've pretty much summed up what I aim for in most of my writing. I'm going to be writing some more hopefully... you know... without the year plus gap :D