Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 Helping a Friend

Damn. What a sexy chapter! I mean, the whole thing was fantastic!

Before I start, thanks for the shoutout, and I'm glad you like the panty 5000 idea which was honestly just a idea from your chair 3000 idea from your other chapter. 

Alright, first off, I like Amy. That fact that she likes having a tiny guy in her crotch too makes me like her over both Kelly and Samantha. And maybe Nichole too. But maybe I'm judging too soon since this was a great first impression. 

I like how the panty 5000 works. Strings to further control the tiny and has loops that lets the giantess press the tiny into them. I'm not sure how the tinies get completely inside her pussy when she pulls the strings, so a little clarification on that would help. 

Oh boy, I love Julia! The way she I introduced Sally to Tom was sexy! It's like she is hinting at keeping him for years and years, possibly forever! And that's hot. It's interesting how you decided to make Julia as Amy's sister rather than her mother. If there was one detail to change for my ideal giantess, it would be having Julia as Amy's hot mom instead. (But if you can't change the minor detail, that's ok. She's still awesome.) 

If you are open to other changes, I might suggest having Tom at 18 or 19 so that way he is half Julia's age. Hmm, maybe you could add a backstory where Tom was so eager for pussy before he turned 18, but once he became tiny, he immediately got scared of pussy since he became a part of a Panty 5000. So now his dream is high nightmare come true. Apologies if I'm being picky, but I would love to see it come true. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!