Reviewer: Edmond Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2021 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Game that should not be played

WOW!! WOW!! TEN THOUSAND TIMES WOW!!

This ius the best story I've read so far in this site, I even created an account just to tell you that!

Also, hoorays for the vore scene in that last chapter! A 70foot tall woman with no living humans inside her stomach sounds like a waste. Still, all other Guinevere scenes were great, don't get me wrong! I was just wanting to have some good vore, and she was perfect (and perfectly sized) for that!

I don't know if you already have the last chapter written and I don't know if my suggestions would decrease its qualitty (as you proved to be a very gifted writer), but if you're still wanting to have suggestions, how about, after the game ends and everything starts going back to normal, Phillip shrinks more as a temporary side effect of his own little sister shrinking a lot to be normnal again? But Phillip should be around some inches tall, not microscopic btw. And his sister, still wanting to have and show some power over him, would insiert him in her anal cavity and keep him there inside for a while, maybe a night. The day after, still small but already free for Lili's rectum, he would try to run from  her, just to e caught again and, this time, eaten by her. You could write a cool scene describing Phillip's situation inside Lili's stomach, then he would start growing slowly, forcing her stomach to push him out, making Lili throw him up, and then he would finish growing and everything would be back to normal. If they would remember everything, or only these last moments I ask you to write (if possible / desired), or if they would remember nothing, going with their lives as if nothing special had happened, it's up to you.

Again, thank you for such  SUPERB story! I'd give you 100's of stars if I could!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed the vore scene. I needed to show that something is going with Guinevere's mind that is causing her to be more assertive with her size. For the final chapter, I have it all planned out so there is little I am doing from straying from that path. I am working on an alternate ending, so those ideas might come up.