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Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Every game has winners and losers

Great Chapter. I like that Lily keeps getting bigger and bigger. Does she get even bigger? I am cheering for Lily and Phillip to get together. I am happy that Judith got something out of this round. I hope that Lily will be kind to Phillip.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I am leaving some of the growth and shrinking of the next round in the readers hand so it is up to them. I am seeing that Lily is a little mean, I want her to have something of a dominating personality but also be kind.

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