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Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot

Sorry, I forgot to say that, in the scenes I sugested in my last commentary, Lili should be back to the age/size she had before she started changing. While Phillip, as I said, should be temporarily just a few inches tall, perfect for being inserted inside Lili's rectum and eaten by her, as I asked you to write in the last chapter.

Again, thank you SO MUCH for such GREAT story! And please, have more five stars for you with this comment, you deserve it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I will consider these ideas.

Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot

Awww.I hope their relationship gets better. 😩

Please tell me it will...

Keep up the good work! 😁



Author's Response:

Thank you for the response. You just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Ombligo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2020 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot

Very interesting story! I'm also one of the folks rooting for a happy ending, that by story's end the good girl is the big girl - whether that means judith grows larger or lily comes to see the error of her ways.

In the short term, it might be fun to see some developments that are a little more out there. Maybe Philip gains a superpower, or some change sends wider NWO ripple effects through society?

Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I will see about implementing Phillip with a superpower or a new world order as best as I possibly can.

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