Date: June 03 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot
Sorry, I forgot to say that, in the scenes I sugested in my last commentary, Lili should be back to the age/size she had before she started changing. While Phillip, as I said, should be temporarily just a few inches tall, perfect for being inserted inside Lili's rectum and eaten by her, as I asked you to write in the last chapter.
Again, thank you SO MUCH for such GREAT story! And please, have more five stars for you with this comment, you deserve it!
Thank you very much, I will consider these ideas.
Date: June 03 2021 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Game that should not be played
WOW!! WOW!! TEN THOUSAND TIMES WOW!!
This ius the best story I've read so far in this site, I even created an account just to tell you that!
Also, hoorays for the vore scene in that last chapter! A 70foot tall woman with no living humans inside her stomach sounds like a waste. Still, all other Guinevere scenes were great, don't get me wrong! I was just wanting to have some good vore, and she was perfect (and perfectly sized) for that!
I don't know if you already have the last chapter written and I don't know if my suggestions would decrease its qualitty (as you proved to be a very gifted writer), but if you're still wanting to have suggestions, how about, after the game ends and everything starts going back to normal, Phillip shrinks more as a temporary side effect of his own little sister shrinking a lot to be normnal again? But Phillip should be around some inches tall, not microscopic btw. And his sister, still wanting to have and show some power over him, would insiert him in her anal cavity and keep him there inside for a while, maybe a night. The day after, still small but already free for Lili's rectum, he would try to run from her, just to e caught again and, this time, eaten by her. You could write a cool scene describing Phillip's situation inside Lili's stomach, then he would start growing slowly, forcing her stomach to push him out, making Lili throw him up, and then he would finish growing and everything would be back to normal. If they would remember everything, or only these last moments I ask you to write (if possible / desired), or if they would remember nothing, going with their lives as if nothing special had happened, it's up to you.
Again, thank you for such SUPERB story! I'd give you 100's of stars if I could!
Thank you very much for the reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed the vore scene. I needed to show that something is going with Guinevere's mind that is causing her to be more assertive with her size. For the final chapter, I have it all planned out so there is little I am doing from straying from that path. I am working on an alternate ending, so those ideas might come up.
Date: January 02 2021 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 21: Move the Game Outside and Play There
Can't wait to see everyone back to adults soon and a super giant Lily.
Thank you for the review. Everyone will be back to adults soon. Just have to have some intersting interaction before they return to the game.
Date: December 03 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: The game you always come back to
His mom used him like a dildo and got pregnant. That is great. will the mom ever figure out that she and her son had sex or that she grew becuase of it? It is funny that Guinevere lost Phillip in her pussy for two months. don't you think she would have known if her lover was missing for two months?
Either way great story. Keep up the good work
The mom will not figure out that Phillip got tiny because of the board game. She will just become tall like all the other women of the world. Guinevere got so busy with taking care of Sarah that so totally forgot about Phillip because he couldn't help at all with Sarah. She had to take care of baby like a single mom.
Date: November 19 2020 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18: Beach Games
Kind of missing the boars game and the changes. Did they finish the game? If not are they going to? Curious if they did finish it, how would it end for them?
They have not finished the board game yet. They will get back to the board game and there will be more changes. I am right now showing how the board game is changing the world and how they affect it. They are right now getting a taste of what could be in store for them, like Lily becoming the sex idol, Guinevere. So continue to wait and read until the board game comes back soon.
Date: November 12 2020 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Game
Loving the interactions with Phillip and Lily. I hope we get more growth soon. I have to say that the beach sounds like a good idea for Phillip to go to. That is my opinion. Hope to see more soon.
Thank your for your opinion. They are now at the beach and more growth will be coming soon. Thank you for reading.
Date: November 05 2020 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 15: Trickery is not a good strategy for the game
Poor Phillip. That was terrible thing for Judith to do. I hope that things either get patched up between the two or he stays with Lily.
Thank you for the response. it was a terrible thing for Judith to do. You have to wait and see what happens.
Date: October 27 2020 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Foreign Game
Great story. I like it when more people grow bigger. Does Phillip get smaller at all? Mulan is a great character. I hope that some more stuff happens with her. For another character, I can't give an full opinion yet. if he ends up with Judith, either he gets into the hands of author who visits or Judith meets with other moms and he is in the hands of hot milf situation. if it is Lily, A neighbor finds him, maybe one of the kids, or she meets a new person.
Either way great story keep up the work
Thank you for your input. you have to wait and see what happens with Phillip. Thank you for your honest opinion about a new character. I listen to input and put it into the story. if it goes in one of those situation I will try to use those characters designs.
Date: October 21 2020 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot
Very interesting story! I'm also one of the folks rooting for a happy ending, that by story's end the good girl is the big girl - whether that means judith grows larger or lily comes to see the error of her ways.
In the short term, it might be fun to see some developments that are a little more out there. Maybe Philip gains a superpower, or some change sends wider NWO ripple effects through society?
Thank you for your response. I will see about implementing Phillip with a superpower or a new world order as best as I possibly can.
Date: October 20 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: Adult and Children Games
Could Phillips balls and penis be enlarged, way too big for his hands to even grab and constantly filling with Cum his dick has to be "milked" like every half hour or it's painful with his balls swelling nonstop?
Thank you for your response. I will try to put this in as best as I can
Date: October 19 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10: It is dangerous hunting for big game
I like how Lily actual has a heart. If you are taking suggestions for another round of the game. I suggest Judith getting older and taller, Lily getting taller and younger, and Phillip getting smaller and younger.
Thank you for your response. I will try my best to put these in.
Date: October 16 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Every game has winners and losers
Great Chapter. I like that Lily keeps getting bigger and bigger. Does she get even bigger? I am cheering for Lily and Phillip to get together. I am happy that Judith got something out of this round. I hope that Lily will be kind to Phillip.
Thank you very much. I am leaving some of the growth and shrinking of the next round in the readers hand so it is up to them. I am seeing that Lily is a little mean, I want her to have something of a dominating personality but also be kind.
Date: October 15 2020 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 8: Phillip's game plan for rebellion.
I wouldn't mind seeing Judith get a bit taller and older as Lily gets a bit smaller and younger again. Cause personally I'm rooting for Phillip and Judith to have a little win here.
Thank you very much. I will see about Phillip and Judith getting a little win.
Date: October 14 2020 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: Phillip's game plan for rebellion.
Pretty good chapter. I'm hoping that Judith is able to help Phil fight against his sister's dominance. I feel like that's the only way to truly save the both of them and finish the game. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you very much. We will see what Judith will do.
Date: October 14 2020 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 7: The game is more fun with more people
Like this chapter. Would be funny if Judith's mom gets pregnant from using her daughters toy. Lol
Thank you very much. definitly hear more about her.
Sorry that I messed up yours and @bigfly20 response from earlier
Date: October 11 2020 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 6: Take every shot you can to play the game
Great story. The missing text made it hard to follow but now I can.
I like Philip being inside Lily's pussy. Hope to see more of that.
This is for @SciFiCrazy. I accidently responded out of order. Sorry
Please read your response in his one above yours
Thank you very much glad you are enjoy it.
Date: October 10 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 2: The game didn't stay home
Definately one of the more entertaining stories I've read in a while. I do recommend a little more proof reading but for a first story it's going well so far.
It be cool to see Judith or Lily land on black and have them end up with a pregnancy. Or maybe judith could be come a baby, Lily lactates, and Phillip could be unbirthed and end up as Lily's unborn baby in a 6th month pregnant belly.
Either way, will be interesting to see what you do write.
Thank you. I am glad you enjoy it. I will try to proof read it more in future. I am looking for ideas for more interactions. A black tile shall appear in the future.