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Reviewer: tinyone999 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2022 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a great story! Any chance of a sequel?

Reviewer: 0neGenericWord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2020 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man good solid wholesome omnipotent brat content is, not only a rarity but also really hard to pull off as well as you do here. I think that the concepts and displays of absolute confident dominance is impressive in itself but that you do it while perfectly characterizing these two very different, very flawed, very scary women in this well paced scene is, nothing short of amazing. Great work!



Author's Response:

Oh wow thank you so much for you kind words! This is one of the more character and dialogue heavy stories I wrote, so I'm please that the two "protagonists" are well received. It was definitely a fun piece to write.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed it! Two Goddesses having mortals and their realities as playthings! I'd love to end up in Stacy's right boot underfoot for eternity!

Reviewer: Mark2420 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this first chapter! It's very well written, and I really liked the scenarios you included. I hope you're able to find the time to continue this story, again well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! So this story is actually complete for now. I won't rule out a possible sequel or something in the future though, since who knows what the future holds right? But, keep in mind that nothing is really planned right now at least. The "Chapter 1" is just the default monochapter they give you here when submitting a story, you see.

Anyways happy you've enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the characters. They're your best yet. You've illustrated a great frienemy relationship and they had believable banter. Hope to see these two again, maybe.

Also, who spells Stacy with an e? Not saying Taylor deserved that, but...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm happy you like the characters since this was way more dialogue and character driven than most other stories I've done.

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story man! Loved the parts with Stacy's boot the most, but the whole story was fun to read. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my story!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ah reality warping brats, a fine and fun trope indeed.

 

An excellent read with some creative mayhem and legally safe product placement. Lawyers are scarier than any giantess ever will be.



Author's Response:

Hey AdamX thanks for reading this and sharing your thoughts!

It's funny you noticed the product stuff! I typically stray away from real world products and all that. It's not so much legality as trying to create a kind of separation from the real world. One other little 'trick' I use is having stories take place in a Earth a few decades ahead of the current time. This way I can write about Earth cities and such while still having a degree of separation. This story, however, was meant to be in a somewhat modern setting: at least in design.

Anyways thanks again!

Reviewer: Jessajess99 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting series idea! i like anthologies too haha, best of luck :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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