Reviews For Chelsea's Captive
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Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: A humiliating start

I love this concept, but perhaps you should use Chelsea's roommate's name instead of just "the roommate"?  



Author's Response:

Yes that is something I probably did not even notice I was doing.  I will either go back and edit it or give her a name at next scene.

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