Reviews For Chelsea's Captive
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Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: A humiliating start

I love this concept, but perhaps you should use Chelsea's roommate's name instead of just "the roommate"?  



Author's Response:

Yes that is something I probably did not even notice I was doing.  I will either go back and edit it or give her a name at next scene.

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 intro to the situation

I like where this is going. Captures both the unaware from one girl and sadisticness from the other.



Author's Response:

Yes for the longest time I notcied there was a huge emphasis on unaware stories.  I never made one simply, because they were not my forte, but then I thought to myself okay this is maybe somehting I can give a shot with the right theme and characters in mind.  I actually am going to upload part 2 very soon.

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