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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Interesting chapter.  At the point she shrunk though, her clothes seemed to vanish as she was stated as naked.  Her clothes not being noticed or mentioned in the bar.   When she was vomited up and then finally returns home, all of a sudden, the story mentions them tattered and covered in vomit as if the clothing shrunk with her prior to being swallowed.  Other than that it was a quick and fun read.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ashley can't catch a break :( 


Though another great written chapter, but yeah wish she could have some time to herself.

Nicely written content though here :)

(but still wish her parents became aware XD) 

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