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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2021 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now that chapter was unbelievably an awesome read. Liked the bit of humor added into it with her being trapped in her brother and he can't do anything because his parents would ask questions.

Maybe do an alternate of this one where the brother hears the sisters story and steals the remote himslefmto have some of his own form of fun.

Realky looking forward to seeing more.  

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2021 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow!!!

Yes!! Finally someone knows the truth.

Loved the sexy giant interaction with Derek here, and that someone in the family finally knows the truth.

I'd say screw it, tell their parent's (though I've made my opinion on this known in other reviews) I feel it need to happen, even if in an alternate ending/alternate chapter.

Just having that horrified realization, which you know could not be healed, no ammount of apologies or acts of forgiveness would work after her parents had used her so horrible for their own pleasure, and almost killed her.


Anyway! I loved this chapter, so sexy and hot. 

Can't wait to see where this goes (though I have my hopes XD)

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