Reviewer: Inwiththebooks Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 8:28 PM Title: Rude Awakening

You certainly managed to capture the despair that humans feel when they are captured wonderfully! As well as the general casual disdain that the vast majority of elves have for humans. Doesn't matter who you were, because in Elsira you are just another animal to be taught the proper way. Unless you are lucky, they you just get patronizing pethood. Great so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The "meat" of the story has yet to occur, but hopefully folks can enjoy the beginning as well.  It's a really rich setting!