[Report This]Date: October 01 2020 2:48 AM Title: Tactical Error
Hey there, this story was wonderful. I definitely enjoyed the conflict between the two sides, and the back and forth between them until our wonderful protagonist finally succumbed to their fate.
In addition to enjoying the narrative, I found the footplay wonderful as well. My favorite moment was seeing their 'betrayal' of Lucrezia, forcing her to unwillingly partake in the worship all while Cithrel lazily basked in her power. It was a rather lovely moment.
Thanks again for the lovely story!
-Jess
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful review! The elves have turned battering down humans into a system, so sadly even fighting against them is more a mental exercise on the human's part.
I'm hoping to do some more stories in the "Humanity's Downfall" universe. This one was more focused on the humans, but there will probably be a mix.