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Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2020 7:38 AM Title: Day Out & About

Great chapter well worth the wait take your time if they come out like this all the time it's worth the wait

Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 12:16 PM Title: Promotion

Will this story continue?

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes! Sorry it's been quite some time. Haven't had much time to continue it and hitting some writers block but I plan on trying to get a few more chapters out soon!

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2020 8:41 PM Title: Morning Madness

cant wait for more

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 8:02 AM Title: Morning Madness

Hard to believe this is is your first story and your writing skills seem to improve every chapter. Love the interaction and the genuine respect between them. Your last chapter makes me wonder in which spot he will have to hide next ;) I really look forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: Indyboy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 4:33 AM Title: Morning Madness

love it, so erotic yet funny and dramatic!

Reviewer: Indyboy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 1:58 AM Title: Bath Time

Amazing work, keep it up! 

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 7:09 AM Title: Accidents Happen

Just came across this story and its absolutely fantastic! Really can't believe that this is your first story. Really love the direction this is going and the interactions between James and Madison feel so genuine. Really can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cappie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2020 11:49 AM Title: Promotion

Very nice start! I hope to see more in future!

 

Reviewer: Indyboy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2020 11:56 PM Title: Promotion

love it so far!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2020 7:10 PM Title: Discovery

Really good build up in the first three chapters. I'm excited to see how the relationship of the characters is going to develop. I Hope to see more! 

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2020 8:25 PM Title: Promotion

Solid build up with the first two chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I wanted to get a good base and back story built, it's going to be a work in progress, but I have ideas for how it'll go throughout. It'll get more fun soon enough though!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2020 8:17 PM Title: Promotion

Interesting story start. Please continue.
Sorry my English is terrible.



Author's Response:

Planning on it! No worries either.

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