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Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2020 6:26 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

This story has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see what comes next! 



Author's Response:

Hope I don't disappoint then :D

Reviewer: bodyglove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2020 2:03 PM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

Enjoying this so far. Well written



Author's Response:

I do try to make sure my writing is never rushed or lazy not matter what but it's nice to hear its regonised :)

Basically I'm saying a long winded thank you! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2020 1:05 AM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

Great stuff

Reviewer: Zingers Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2020 11:15 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

The story shows tons of promise! Love you're writing style and hope we get to see just how cruel some of these people can be. Best of luck!



Author's Response:

In all honesty when trying to figure out what could set my story apart from any other on the site I knew my best bet was in my writing. So I try to just write in a way that feels a little different but also very easy to read and polished, if that makes any sense?

Regardless, thank you for your kind words, hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2020 2:04 AM Title: At Eternity's gate

Enjoying the concept.  Wish we could shrink our societies leeches.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

As do I xD

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2020 12:41 AM Title: At Eternity's gate

Curious to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

You me both xD

Seriously though my plan for this is fairly big 

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2020 12:14 AM Title: At Eternity's gate

Well I can already tell I'm gonna be loving this story, looking forward to where it goes from here. 



Author's Response:

I didn't think i did too good in this chapter so im glad to hear you like it already :D

Let me know if you want to see anything happen ;)

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 11:34 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

Interesting story, it reminds me of the manga bye bye, Peter Pan. Great start you have there, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Can't say I'm familiar with the manga but i'll look it up!
And I "hopefully" Intent to have a new chapter every week minimum, 2 weeks max :)

 

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