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Reviewer: VanStarryNight Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2024 12:53 AM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

I've seen a lot of great reviews from a lot of active fans even still. 

So I invite my active fans to contact me through my profile contact button to talk, share ideas and get some views and insights 

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2022 9:31 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

I hope you will continue this Story someday. Too much potential of the Story to be kept unfinished. 



Author's Response:

Hey. I left a view but also tried to reach out to you privately but I don't think it worked.

I've seen you leave great reviews and show constant love and support for my work. So I wanted to reach out to get a chance to talk one on one and share ideas, get your views and help get opinions on whats to come in the future. 

contact me through my profile contact button if you are up for it an we can go from there.

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:40 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

Can‘t forget this Story. Perfect Concept 

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:40 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

Please continue 

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2021 6:40 AM Title: At Eternity's gate

Great to see this story continuing, can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 3:02 PM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

Please drop the next chapter of this amazing Story 



Author's Response:

There will be future chapters to come. Hell theres a lot of stuff to come (if only you could see my notes hehe, stuff gets crazy). 
I apologise for delay in content though. I found these past few months to be busy as hell and it threw a lot of stuff out of wack for me. But fear not, it's merely a delay

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2021 9:36 PM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

So well written.  I am especially interested in the complex relationship between Chris and Lindsey.  She seems to care for him despite their arguing.  Makes me look forward to the remaining events that lead up to the situation between them early in chapter 1.  



Author's Response:

I suppose it's not secret that their relations shit goes more than just surface level. I think that is something I wanted to really explore with them to though, this battle between what is complex and what is down right toxic in a relationship. 
Just in this context it can be a lot more dangerous

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 5:43 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

I like ist how cruel the People are to the shrinkies. The idea that the government decides that they don’t have any human rights and just shrink and are Open to use for the People. Like it. Can you say when you dropping the next chapter?



Author's Response:

I cant say for sure yet. Another creator on this site I'm good friends with always checks to see if I'm working on my stuff so rest assured more is coming haha

But with how busy my life can get it can be difficult to balance. Outside of this site I work with content creator's around the world and help/advise/edit for them as well as doing voice work aaaand vocals for various music projects so my schedule can be pretty wack. All that's excluding my day job and my workout regime. TL;DR It could be very soon, it could be a little while.

I can promise that I am working on the next chapter and I will have it out as soon as possible. So thank you for being patient, you guy keep me going!!! 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 3:56 PM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

More of Rachel x Chris, please?



Author's Response:

Patients, it will come. It will be a few chapters before that happens, but it's going to happen I promise :) 

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 2:56 PM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

Another well written chapter. Nice to see you continue. This is my favourite Story on this site. 



Author's Response:

I am very glad to hear that. It means so much that people like this story. I honestly hope that years from now this will be one of those stories people look back on and appreciate like the many stories I used to read back in the day. 

Reviewer: Zingers Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 8:39 AM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

So happy to see an update! Great work with the new chapter, got me excited for the next one already :)



Author's Response:

Buckle up! Its about to get pretty interesting 

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2021 1:46 AM Title: Massacre Of The Innocents

Excited to see you back at it. Can't wait for next chapter and the shrinking to happen. 



Author's Response:

You'll laugh, you'll cry, it'll change your life xD

If you could see the plan/notes for this series you'd hardly be able to wait ;) 

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2021 2:35 PM Title: The Son of Man

Please continue that work. I would like to read what the people who passed the test have in mind for their former classmates. And what happens with Chris and his friends. And what about Ashley and the cruel cliffhanger at the start of your Great Story.

Author's Response:

Fear not. Chapter 4 is almost ready to go. Just doing some last touches and changes. So keep an eye out :)

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2021 7:37 PM Title: At Eternity's gate

Still holding onto hope that this story will continue to be updated. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Don't let go of that hope. I am still working on this story :)

I know it's been a while...life and distractions and so on, but I am in the process if getting the next chapter out as soon as possible ;)

Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2020 3:30 AM Title: The Son of Man

So looking forward the next chapters.  Hope you keep it up, so realistic and so much potential to explore.



Author's Response:

I will continue to add more dont worry. Been pretty slow with this chapter but rest assured it will come.

Reviewer: waluigixxx Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2020 11:27 PM Title: The Son of Man

Great story! I'm honestly really into it and looking forward to future chapters. Hoping to see some feet/socks/shoes content in the future if you're open to that kinda thing 😉. Regardless, great work!



Author's Response:

Many thank! I love that people are enjoying it.

As for future content, Nothing is off the table really :)

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 8:20 PM Title: The Son of Man

Thanks for the update really enjoying the story and setting. Nice to see character development and interactions especially when he asked his Mom "So I wouldn't be safe at home?" making it seem he was right about her and it hit her like a brick without being able to respond but guessing if it was his sister she probably wouldnt hesitate.

Hope to see him interact with many of his friends and family when he finally shrinks and see how they all react. Guessing from everyone saying that he needs to find someone to take care of him some tinies might actually have a decent living wonder if we get to see some of this.

Cant wait for more keep up the good work.

 



Author's Response:

First of all thank you for the praise, it is really appreciated!

And yes there are instances of tinies having lives free of torment. There even exists entire movements dedicated to finding tinies and keeping them safe (think vegans but for tinies). But in a world were tinies are also seen as disposable and in somecases livestock, its rare. It will be something we will see creep in as a plot point.

As for using the supporting cast to their fullest, very soon my friend ;)

Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 2:59 PM Title: The Son of Man

It really puts teenaged angst and rebellion in a completely new light if the consequences of failure to meet expectations is essentially being snuffed out. I love the extensive character development, and it's utterly understandable and logical that he would be experiencing nightmares regarding what's to come. Thank you very much! Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

I'm a sucker for fleshing out characters. I want this world to feel real and I know that using the people who live in it I can acheive that. It's a double edge sword however as it means that side or smaller character deserve similar care, cant have our main cast swimming around a world of cardboard personalities can we? 

In regards to the angst comment; my main goal was to take two sides of a situation (course and effects, rebellion and attonement etc.) and amp them up to extremes. Just because it's a fetish story doesn't me I cant do a deep dive on society and philosophy :D

Thank you for your kind words too! Makes the work worth it!!!!

Reviewer: Zingers Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 9:09 AM Title: The Son of Man

Another great chapter! Really loving the build up and I'm excited for what's to come!



Author's Response:

It'll feel weird to not be blue balling everyone once the ride ramps up to 100 haha 

Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 3:28 AM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

I really love this story so far, especially the realism of the characters. Look forward to what's next, both him witnessing what may happen to him and after he shrinks. Also hope that he ends up having to serve the feet of one of the girls.

Author's Response:

As to the first part of your review I am greatful to hear you enjoy it so far, believe me there is a lot I have planned in terms of narrative. As for the second part (the feet part) I can't promise anything but I can say it'd be a wasted opportunity not to have some interaction of that sort with either one of the girls ;) 

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