Date: March 10 2021 2:35 PM Title: The Son of Man
Please continue that work. I would like to read what the people who passed the test have in mind for their former classmates. And what happens with Chris and his friends. And what about Ashley and the cruel cliffhanger at the start of your Great Story.
Author's Response:
Fear not. Chapter 4 is almost ready to go. Just doing some last touches and changes. So keep an eye out :)
Date: November 19 2020 3:30 AM Title: The Son of Man
So looking forward the next chapters. Hope you keep it up, so realistic and so much potential to explore.
Author's Response:
I will continue to add more dont worry. Been pretty slow with this chapter but rest assured it will come.
Date: November 10 2020 11:27 PM Title: The Son of Man
Great story! I'm honestly really into it and looking forward to future chapters. Hoping to see some feet/socks/shoes content in the future if you're open to that kinda thing 😉. Regardless, great work!
Author's Response:
Many thank! I love that people are enjoying it.
As for future content, Nothing is off the table really :)
[Report This]Date: October 29 2020 8:20 PM Title: The Son of Man
Thanks for the update really enjoying the story and setting. Nice to see character development and interactions especially when he asked his Mom "So I wouldn't be safe at home?" making it seem he was right about her and it hit her like a brick without being able to respond but guessing if it was his sister she probably wouldnt hesitate.
Hope to see him interact with many of his friends and family when he finally shrinks and see how they all react. Guessing from everyone saying that he needs to find someone to take care of him some tinies might actually have a decent living wonder if we get to see some of this.
Cant wait for more keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
First of all thank you for the praise, it is really appreciated!
And yes there are instances of tinies having lives free of torment. There even exists entire movements dedicated to finding tinies and keeping them safe (think vegans but for tinies). But in a world were tinies are also seen as disposable and in somecases livestock, its rare. It will be something we will see creep in as a plot point.
As for using the supporting cast to their fullest, very soon my friend ;)
[Report This]Date: October 29 2020 2:59 PM Title: The Son of Man
It really puts teenaged angst and rebellion in a completely new light if the consequences of failure to meet expectations is essentially being snuffed out. I love the extensive character development, and it's utterly understandable and logical that he would be experiencing nightmares regarding what's to come. Thank you very much! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I'm a sucker for fleshing out characters. I want this world to feel real and I know that using the people who live in it I can acheive that. It's a double edge sword however as it means that side or smaller character deserve similar care, cant have our main cast swimming around a world of cardboard personalities can we?
In regards to the angst comment; my main goal was to take two sides of a situation (course and effects, rebellion and attonement etc.) and amp them up to extremes. Just because it's a fetish story doesn't me I cant do a deep dive on society and philosophy :D
Thank you for your kind words too! Makes the work worth it!!!!
Date: October 29 2020 9:09 AM Title: The Son of Man
Another great chapter! Really loving the build up and I'm excited for what's to come!
Author's Response:
It'll feel weird to not be blue balling everyone once the ride ramps up to 100 haha