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Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 3:28 AM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

I really love this story so far, especially the realism of the characters. Look forward to what's next, both him witnessing what may happen to him and after he shrinks. Also hope that he ends up having to serve the feet of one of the girls.

Author's Response:

As to the first part of your review I am greatful to hear you enjoy it so far, believe me there is a lot I have planned in terms of narrative. As for the second part (the feet part) I can't promise anything but I can say it'd be a wasted opportunity not to have some interaction of that sort with either one of the girls ;) 

Reviewer: bodyglove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2020 2:03 PM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

Enjoying this so far. Well written



Author's Response:

I do try to make sure my writing is never rushed or lazy not matter what but it's nice to hear its regonised :)

Basically I'm saying a long winded thank you! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2020 1:05 AM Title: "Sorrow" - 1882

Great stuff

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