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Reviewer: Lumberpanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 8:15 PM Title: An Early Visit

I like where this is going. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 7:30 PM Title: An Early Visit

This story is interesting. More please.

 

Sorry my English is terrible.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 5:31 PM Title: A Cold Morning Swim

Interesting, I hope their is a portal that puts him inside his sister while she is masterbating, and he ends up in her womb with the next portal.



Author's Response:

I'm planning a scenario like that.

Reviewer: Nanoname98 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2020 7:39 PM Title: An Early Visit

A very interesting start, I can't wait to read the next chapter :)!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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