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Reviewer: Ecstacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

These latest developments at the barn have been the best yet and most importantly the x-factor in Daisy has been introduced as the tipping force that can send Emma over the edge. For everything that she has to cope with and lost, Daisy is a threat who Emma views as someone who can the last important thing to her, Daniel. The person who has helped and grounded her to the best of his ability throughout her ordeal.

All the details of Emma's jealously to Daisy and Daniel's interactions are incredibly realistic to how people can be in real life, but there's an added truth to her jealously when realizing that Daisy can interact with Daniel in ways that Emma now cannot.

Speaking of which, Daniel and Daisy's interactions have been a great insight to the mental toll that constantly having to cater to Emma and walking on eggshells has taken on Daniel.

And the biggest elephant in the room one of Emma's mood swings have made her act on her impulses and she has seriously hurt Daniel (albeit inadvertently) in the process. Now even more harrowing concerns are on the horizon.

How does Daniel proceed after experiencing how his physical wellbeing is now at risk?How much longer can Emma keep her anger in check before she lashes out? The most pressing, with Daniel growing closer with Daisy and seemingly slipping away from Emma, how far is Emma willing to go to keep him? Or worst, if she does lose him? What does Emma do with no one to ground her and nothing else to lose?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, Ecstacy, and sorry it took me so long to respond!  Your questions are pertinent, and I think you'll find that some of the later chapters provide some answers.  Anyway, I hope you're continuing to enjoy the journey!

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