Date: February 20 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
These latest developments at the barn have been the best yet and most importantly the x-factor in Daisy has been introduced as the tipping force that can send Emma over the edge. For everything that she has to cope with and lost, Daisy is a threat who Emma views as someone who can the last important thing to her, Daniel. The person who has helped and grounded her to the best of his ability throughout her ordeal.
All the details of Emma's jealously to Daisy and Daniel's interactions are incredibly realistic to how people can be in real life, but there's an added truth to her jealously when realizing that Daisy can interact with Daniel in ways that Emma now cannot.
Speaking of which, Daniel and Daisy's interactions have been a great insight to the mental toll that constantly having to cater to Emma and walking on eggshells has taken on Daniel.
And the biggest elephant in the room one of Emma's mood swings have made her act on her impulses and she has seriously hurt Daniel (albeit inadvertently) in the process. Now even more harrowing concerns are on the horizon.
How does Daniel proceed after experiencing how his physical wellbeing is now at risk?How much longer can Emma keep her anger in check before she lashes out? The most pressing, with Daniel growing closer with Daisy and seemingly slipping away from Emma, how far is Emma willing to go to keep him? Or worst, if she does lose him? What does Emma do with no one to ground her and nothing else to lose?
Date: December 15 2020 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story encapsulates a lot of what I like to see in size-changing stories focusing not only on the size change itself, but the psychological effects it has on the subject and the people around them. The story is amazingly carried by the dynamic between Emma and Daniel as they try to cope with how the former's growth effected their lives and relationship.
The physical inconveniences of Emma's growth are everything that you'd expect from this story, but the psychological component has been the highlight.You've given her character an unsettling edge of unpredictability as we see the implications that her condition is having a neurological effect on her where she at first cannot perceive her own growth, her mood swings, and the decreasing regard she sees in a world too small for her (viewing them as the problem). The added touch of her becoming more enamored with the giantess-community is a nice wrinkle as she's seen it as her one haven of acceptance, whereas everyone else around her are some combination of afraid, desparetly trying to appease her, or wanting to perform more tests on her which have been fruitless so far.
Daniel plays off all these traits and circumstances perfectly, trying in every way possible to be helpful and supportive. The tension you create with him being so self-aware that he's constantly treading a field of landmines gives a nailbiting atmosphere where we're both aware that a wrong move may set Emma off to catastrophic results.
Daniel's truly a character between a rock and a hard place. Emma is clearly beyond the amount of help he can provide, but what she might do if he tells her something she doesn't want to hear maybe fatal to his wellbeing. By the skin of his teeth so far he's managed to avoid disaster or reign Emma back in before she's too far gone, but as a viewer it creates the wonderful suspense of what might be the breaking point.
Will Daniel realize enough is enough and that Emma needs help whether she wants it or not? Will Emma have another one of her episodes and seriously hurt Daniel?
A lot of pressing questions, that has me captivated by this story. Great work.
Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Ecstacy! Your commentary on the characters was lovely for me to read, and I raeally appreciate you taking the time to write it! I hope you continue to enjoy this story -- there's a LOT more of it to go! <3
Date: November 14 2020 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
If he managed not to say "The fingers you have used to dial are too fat. To obtain a special dialing wand...", well, she may not realize it yet, but it's one of the most incredible demonstrations of love ever :)
Date: September 24 2020 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying the story so far and I have Hope's from the tags that Emma keeps growing well beyond the mini giantess phase. Thank for you time and efforts with your writing.
Thanks for the comment Krell! Oh yes, Emma's gonna be growing past hte mini-GTS phase ;)
Date: September 24 2020 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
This story is looking great so far! I really like the dynamic between Emma and her boyfriend. I'm enjoying the slower pace since it gives you more time to develope the characters. Im hoping that the relationship of the character's continues to develop in a realistic manner, and I'm hoping that you continue giving it your all. I can't believe that there are virtually no serious reviews for this story, (maybe I'm the only one who values plot over explicit content in my erotica). Keep up the good work! Godspeed.
Thanks so much for the kind review, Lupin! I'm very happy to hear that you're enjoying the dynamics between the characters. It's reviews like these that make me feel good about the work, so thank you! <3 <3